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science club exhibition

Dear Mr.Sam,
My name is Anh, a member of our science club. I am in connection with our upcoming exhibition.
As far as I am concerned, for the purpose of motivating the desire for research science in both children and adults, we will celebrate a science exhibition the next month.

To be honest, I feel a strong urge to receive this scheme because it is an interesting activity for everyone.
Hence, I would venture my opinion. Entrance fees are not necessary for the attendees because it is easier for most people to join in a free event. Instead, we consider calling for investment from companies that want to advertise their products in this exposition. Furthermore, a well-known scientist sharing their research experience will be a spotlight for our event.

I believe that many members have the same ideas as me.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Anh Nguyen.

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