You rented an apartment for a holiday last year and you were happy with it although there was a problem with it. You want to rent it again this year, write a letter about
1) why you were happy with it
2) what was the problem
3) give information of the details and dates you required.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to rent one of your apartments for my upcoming holiday.
In fact, I rented an apartment from you during my holiday last year, and was really delighted with the service I received. If my memory serves me right, the number of the room that I stayed was N123. On my arrival there, I was happy to find that the apartment was more spacious than I had thought. On top of that, the south-facing bedroom overlooked a lovely flower-filled garden. The apartment was even equipped with cooking appliances, which enabled me to cook healthy meals instead of eating out.
However, there was a trivial problem. I found the Internet access was not reliable as expected, because the link went down occasionally. I suppose the culprit might be the net cable, which appeared a bit worn out. So it is better for you to replace it with a new one.
Despite the Internet issue, everything else was perfect during my stay there, as I mentioned above. Therefore, I would like to book a rented accommodation with you for this holiday, which starts on 7th of this month and ends on 15th. You can reach me at 13778455624.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
1) why you were happy with it
2) what was the problem
3) give information of the details and dates you required.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to rent one of your apartments for my upcoming holiday.
In fact, I rented an apartment from you during my holiday last year, and was really delighted with the service I received. If my memory serves me right, the number of the room that I stayed was N123. On my arrival there, I was happy to find that the apartment was more spacious than I had thought. On top of that, the south-facing bedroom overlooked a lovely flower-filled garden. The apartment was even equipped with cooking appliances, which enabled me to cook healthy meals instead of eating out.
However, there was a trivial problem. I found the Internet access was not reliable as expected, because the link went down occasionally. I suppose the culprit might be the net cable, which appeared a bit worn out. So it is better for you to replace it with a new one.
Despite the Internet issue, everything else was perfect during my stay there, as I mentioned above. Therefore, I would like to book a rented accommodation with you for this holiday, which starts on 7th of this month and ends on 15th. You can reach me at 13778455624.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
