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My assessment entitled five senses poem (tastes/sounds/smells/looks/makes)



cornelia 1 / 4  
Nov 3, 2010   #1
can you please help me on my assessment entitled five senses poem
.here is the format
line1: (an emotion or idea) is (one or two color)
line2: it tastes like __________
line3: it sounds like __________
line4: it smells like __________
line5: it looks like __________
line6: it makes me feel __________

please answer my assessment i need your help to do this
please respond
.tnx. .

OP cornelia 1 / 4  
Nov 4, 2010   #2
.please help me in this assessment. Tnx. .
auds 2 / 40  
Nov 7, 2010   #3
lol, aren't you supposed to have already done this urself and we would critique it?! but I will take a crack at it, but im warning you, it may not be very good.

Line1: I can paint a picture with my words is white (i chose white because that would be my canvas color) idk maybe it doesnt make sense.

Line2: It tastes like the different flavors of Skittles
Line3: It sounds like Billie Holiday singing to me on a rainy afternoon
Line4: It smells like freshly brewed coffee on a Sunday morning
Line5: It looks like it's everything I want it to be
Line6: It makes me feel invincible

This was actually really hard to do. I just wrote down the things that I liked. Hopefully this helps spark a eureka moment :)
OP cornelia 1 / 4  
Nov 8, 2010   #4
thank you for your response
at least i have an idea on what to do with mypoem
tnx a lot
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Nov 13, 2010   #5
Ha ha, nice job, Narothnee Jean-Pierre! I would change different to various.

Good luck with this fun assignment, Cornelia! It is the kind of thing that is correct no matter how you complete the sentences. Just express yourself! :-)
auds 2 / 40  
Nov 15, 2010   #6
lol thanks Kevin, I tried!!


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