Trust Trust is the color of blue. It sounds like a frienship of true. It taste like the salt from the sea. It smells like a fresh morning breeze. Trust makes me feel like there will always be someone there for me.
I think you have a good start! I like the first line especially. However, I think the next one needs some work (besides the spelling, which I corrected): "It sounds like a friendship of true." That doesn't really make any sense, and even though you are being metaphorical, there needs to be enough truth in the words to make your reader relate to what you are saying. Try this line again; perhaps it could sound like some type of music. Or the ringing of a bell. Does the poem have to contain rhyme? If so, perhaps "The sound of a dove's quiet coo."
Common Sense is necessity When I think of her, I see Of all the senses that make me She makes me sight reality
Common Sense cannot fail No matter the time or veil which blinds me, it hails a goodness which cannot fail
Common Sense is Wisdom old It came from the ancients Socrates, Aristotle, and Plato Perception or Reason in good sense
You weren't being specific enough. Give me a sample or an idea of what you are wanting me to write about or on. ( This way I will have a good focus.) If this is going in the essay, that is.
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