i wrote this and i would like some feedback. Please and thankyou!!!
Imagination
Never ending
dreaming, creating, inspiring
portal to indefinite knowledge
illusion
Greetings!
I think you've done a great job with your cinquain poem! I especially like your description on Line 4. The only question I would have is about Line 2. As you know, Line 2 is to contain two adjectives which describe the noun on Line 1; technically, "never-ending" is one word, a hyphenated adjective. Now, that may be just fine; I suppose it depends how picky one wants to be. Personally, I like your poem just the way it is! :-)
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
Poem On a CINQUAIN
Hi, I need really good ideas for all the different types of poems here. If I need new or better words, please feel free to change anything up!
On a CINQUAIN,
1st line: one word noun
2nd line: two words adjectives describing that noun
3rd line: three words verbs to show action regarding the noun
4th line: four words that express feeling about the noun like a phrase
5th line: one word that is a synonym for the noun above
here is what i have so far:
Winter
Cold, chilly
Freezing, snowing, blowing << might need to change that word
Temperatures are below 60 degrees << does that make sense or is that fine?
Season
Cat
Furry, cute
shedding, meowing, running << whats another word i could use?
They are so adorable << i really need to change that, i sound like a little kid. another meaningful phrase?
Kitten
Spring
fresh, pretty << i need another adjective describing spring, this is just too simple
blooming, raining, warming
nature comes to life
season
PLEASE HELP ME SOON!! THANKS
You'll have a fun and easy time with this, also create something great, if you just get out your thesaurus! Look up any of the words you've written here, then take the ones that sound the coolest to you! Good luck and have fun!
:)
