A limerick I wrote, can u help me perfect it???

There once was a banker named Embers
who kept everyone's cash against dangers
Then One day
A farmer came in
To store
His money from strangers
But with him, a cow
was big and fat
Who was as hungry as a man
Who could eat a cat.
Now the cow decided
Since there was no grass
He'd have to eat
Only the greens
That he could see
So he broke into the safe
And carried away
All the money
That was left that day
He chowed down on his greens
And Yummed, and Grummed
And Meowed and Wowed
Until the money was gone
Then the next day
The banker woke-up
He checked the safe
But found everything gone
He screamed and screamed
And ran in a circle.
Until finally
he started to chant
"There once was a banker named Embers
who kept everyone's cash against dangers"

Could someone help me edit this? I would really appreciate it if someone could tell me if they think there is a way to give it more of a rythm. Thx!!

I enjoyed reading your limerick.

There once was a banker named Embers A limerick generally is constructed with five usually anapestic lines with the rhyme scheme of aabba. In your case, the second "a" is "dangers", so a name like "Tangiers", or "Hainjers" would work.

who kept everyone's cash against dangers
Then One day
A farmer came in Since this is your first "b" line, it needs to rhyme with "day". This helps keep the meter.

To store his money from strangers Combine these two lines to keep with the five anapestic lines and your aabba rhyme scheme

He brought with him a cow, who was big and fat
As hungry as a man and who could eat a cat
Now the cow decided (Difficult word to rhyme; how about a synonym such as "settles", "chooses", or "prevocates"
Since there was no grass This is your second "b" verse, so it needs to rhyme with "decided". If we use "settles" in the above line, how about "Since there were no nettles"

He'd have to eat This line needs to rhyme with "fat" and "cat". How about "only that".

Only the greens Green color which he could see
That he could see Which just happened to be
So he broke into the safe Inside the vault
And carried away He was starving; it wasn't his fault
That next he grabbed all the money.
None of these lines rhyme. Traditionally they should keep to the "aabba" scheme.

All the money
That was left that day
He chowed down on his greens
And Yummed, and Grummed
None of these lines rhyme. Traditionally they should keep to the "aabba" scheme.

And Meowed and Wowed
Until the money was gone
Then the next day
The banker woke-up
He checked the safe
None of these lines rhyme. Traditionally they should keep to the "aabba" scheme.

But found everything gone
He screamed and screamed
And ran in a circle.
Until finally
he started to chant
None of these lines rhyme. Traditionally they should keep to the "aabba" scheme.

"There once was a banker named Embers
who kept everyone's cash against dangers"
In order to keep to the traditional scheme, add three more lines to make a complete five, keeping the rhyming scheme to "aabba".

I hope this helps you.