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I am poem; I am determined and shy



shorty4258 1 / 3  
Sep 2, 2008   #1
Hello I have an I am poem, and I was just wondering if you could help me to finish I really don't understand what to do. I started on it and hope you could give me suggustion.

I am determined and shy
I wonder if i'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hotting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy
...

OP shorty4258 1 / 3  
Sep 3, 2008   #2
please right soon its due on Friday .
EF_Team5 - / 1583  
Sep 3, 2008   #3
Good afternoon. I have a few suggestions:

"I am determined and shy
I wonder if I'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hooting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy

I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down on unwealthy people
I touch...
I worry ...
I cry when I watch sad movies
I am determined and shy

I understand that anything is possible
I say...
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight " A's" in my report card
I hope ...
I am determined and shy"

This is the basic format for the "I am" poem:

I am (two special characteristics)

I wonder (something you are actually curious about)

I hear (an imaginary sound)

I see (an imaginary sight)

I want (an actual desire)

I am (the first line of the poem restated)

I pretend (something you pretend to do)

I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)

I touch (an imaginary touch)

I worry (something that really bothers you)

I cry (something that makes you very sad)

I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I understand (something you know is true)

I say (something you believe in)

I dream (something you actually dream about)

I try (something you make an effort to do)

I hope (something you actually hope for)

I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I hope this helps.

Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
OP shorty4258 1 / 3  
Sep 3, 2008   #4
but i was asking if you can tell what to put in the lines that i didn't completed in i cant think of anything
OP shorty4258 1 / 3  
Sep 3, 2008   #5
can you like give me what you can tell me in like the 4 lines i didn't right in i cant think of anything . what would you right for i say , i touch, i worry, and i dream dont know what to put in
Rajiv 55 / 398  
Sep 5, 2008   #6
I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down to unwealthy people
I touch...the window panes and see the glimmering goodies inside
I worry ...I may never have them, sometimes -- should I even try
I cry when im watching sad movies
I am determined and shy

I understand that anything is possible
I say...I too can do what I try
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight A's in my report card
I hope ...there isn't anything which will hold me back
I am determined and shy
EF_Team5 - / 1583  
Sep 5, 2008   #7
Thank you Rajiv.

Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
Rajiv 55 / 398  
Sep 5, 2008   #8
.. my pleasure, Gloria.

Thanks.


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