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May 20, 2008   #1
Hello all! I'm new to the forum. Man am I glad that I found you! :)

It's been quite a while since I've written a research paper and I must admit that I am very rusty. I need some help polishing my thesis statement. Any suggestions?

In the past 100 years, social, economic and environmental changes have caused Christian women to call into question previously held ideals regarding motherhood and reproduction, leading many to the belief that a woman seeking to serve God has several other, equally valid options available to her.

EF_Team5 - / 1583  
May 20, 2008   #2
Good evening!

It looks like your wording is good, there's just some mechanical errors. How about this:
"In the past 100 years social, economic, and environmental changes have caused Christian women to call into question previously held ideals regarding motherhood and reproduction, leading many to the belief that a woman seeking to serve God has sever other equally valid options available to her."

Nice work!

Regards,
Gloria
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EF_Team5 - / 1583  
May 21, 2008   #4
No problem!

Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com


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