i need help to check on my essay; i am trying to find out if there are some errors in it in
my research essay ,or alittle bit more to explain about perhaps. can someone please assist me.
EXPLAINING FILE ATTWOG 9 AND PROJECT (3-2)
This is everything i needed to do research about because every idea has been brought here in form of a chart.It shows clearly God's mind and its components are great and real.unlike any other theory chart,it explains a certain preserved thought by God known as tomorrows thought in today's thought ,which God is present to preserve a life(spiritually).More importantly is that it helps us then know that man is the determiner of all forms of life unlike any other theory that only tells of certain changes only.(in fulfilment).
About project(3)-2doc this now makes me whom i am.It makes me a war humanitarian and shows ways and plans of God to bring ideas of excellent treaty making components that as well in my list of research projects.doc,show that faithfulness is important where humandignity is to be taken as a serious right as well as privacy,in that by claiming for this respect,the idea can be perfected forever in the future.(HAS DISCOVERIES LIKE:3 TYPES OF AN OATH AND THE MEASURE OF POWER IN AN OATH)
FROM DEPRIVATION TO BLESSING:This file contains information and definitions of time according to a certain diary of recorded life and dates in the past and their similality with
the life that we or i am living today called fulfilment.It defines the lord of host as to be derived as a term represented by researched knowledge about the conditions in the future that is today,and the conditions researched are distress, endurance and faithfulness.It brings every Biblical prophecy in old and new testament to fulfilment,but most importantly points out to what God is accomplishing through this project of work and its aim.Its Gods kingdom that has been fulfiled although may face difficulties and alot of deceit,yet it will accomplish everything God intends through faith.
EXPLAINING ATTWOG(1,2,3,4,5-1,6,910,12):This is the main start of everything that has been written in fulfilment.It was from here that everything has been made possible that everyone will learn the truth as it is in the Bible, and come to realise that it is true that God exists and every verse written down is a proof of all that.To then have a researcher or an invesigator to all this is important when the truth about life has to be taken well seriously without us taking any life or life and dignity for no importance, to fight hard for the respect in life and the right to express knowledge through the word of God in life today.It gives a chance for the participation of minds and hearts in learning the truth and how to live life today aware of consequences in life.It simply is God's word living today and truth.
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About project(3)-2doc this now makes me whom i am.It makes me a war humanitarian and shows ways and plans of God to bring ideas of excellent treaty making components that as well in my list of research projects.doc i will explain this that, i wrote that way because i was writing about a project of research, that through its investigation,it brought the real idea into its real meaning, as i write that it makes me a war humanitarian through what contributions it proves in its investigation ,to bring the real meaning and acheivement of peace.and as well, It was from here that everything has been made possible that everyone will learn the truth as it is in the Bible, and come to realise that it is true that God exists and every verse written down, is a proof of all that. -If you write to me that these words are offensive, then it does not show whether you look at it as a research file explaining other files as an essay ,will you agree with me?
I appreciate your correction because i need it ,but can you please answer me for these two questions please.
