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The greatest lawyer in the world, Abraham Lincoln, which is also the first president of the united state had fought heavily against the appertide ideology and vanished the social classes really aspired me.He had a strong heart and faith in whatever he is doing.
I aspire to become a lawyer, not for the prestige or income of the profession, but because I believe that a hardworking person with a creative brain can change the world, I have the potential and heart to become one. To make a different, I chose to study law as well as syariah.The syariah also beneficial and useful for the Islamic banking and to settle dispute before the Syariah Court.Well, someone need to do something looking to the chaos happened nowadays.Many innocent people are imprisoned. Women and children from all over the world are physically, mentally and emotionally abused. Beggars everywhere.People being killed, raped, and the and the violent offender are released without being brought before the law. Human rights are violated every day and in many ways. That is why, I want to defend the innocent, speak out against prejudice, help fight human for rights and speak up for the oppressed.
The greatest lawyer in the world, Abraham Lincoln, which is also the first president of the united state had fought heavily against the appertide ideology and vanished the social classes really aspired me.He had a strong heart and faith in whatever he is doing.
I aspire to become a lawyer, not for the prestige or income of the profession, but because I believe that a hardworking person with a creative brain can change the world, I have the potential and heart to become one. To make a different, I chose to study law as well as syariah.The syariah also beneficial and useful for the Islamic banking and to settle dispute before the Syariah Court.Well, someone need to do something looking to the chaos happened nowadays.Many innocent people are imprisoned. Women and children from all over the world are physically, mentally and emotionally abused. Beggars everywhere.People being killed, raped, and the and the violent offender are released without being brought before the law. Human rights are violated every day and in many ways. That is why, I want to defend the innocent, speak out against prejudice, help fight human for rights and speak up for the oppressed.