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Bachelor's degree in Nursing; SHORT & LONG TERM GOALS



smartgera2009 2 / 1  
Jun 12, 2013   #1
My short and long term goals

I define my objectives as I see them. I associate them with my values knowing that the task at hand is essential in achieving them. As an aspiring Nurse, my short term goal is to work endlessly towards obtaining my Bachelor's degree in Nursing. I put in more efforts, more enthusiasm and more time towards achieving my dreams and accomplishing my passion. I want to become all I could in my education since am still young and has the burning passion to become the best. I place an emphasis on education because I believe it is the vehicle that allows us to move forward in life. I am also working on my personality to be vigilant, patient, attentive and competent because these are the attributes that encompasses one as being a Nurse.

In all honesty, it has taken me a long while to get where I am. Ever since High school, I was never that child who had a back bone, even though I was smart, I never had the determination to push my limits and come out from my comfort zone, but that changed when I realized what I was capable of. I have stuck to my confidence ever since my fresh-man year.

In my short term goal, I also intend on working in a hospital as a volunteer since I have a license as a Nurse Aide. My aim of doing this is to gain work experience and well needed skill in my career as a Nurse.

My long term goal is to become a medical Doctor. That is one of my reasons of majoring in Nursing since it is a related course to medicine and hopefully transfer my credit hours to a medical school. I want to be an oncologist and help in the cure of cancer. I found myself in constant admiration for Doctors and I envision myself to become one someday in order to make impacts on people's lives. I want to be fully devoted in medical researches, putting smiles on people's faces and help create platforms for the less-privileged in caring for their well-being. I want to become an industrious doctor who is always willing to help patients at any point in time. Health care professionals have touched my life in different areas through the years, and I feel compelled to leave a similar impact on the lives of others.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Jun 12, 2013   #2
I define my objectives as I see them.

... I think this line does not add any value addition to your response. Since there is a word count limit, you better make use of every word you write for this response.

I put in more efforts, more enthusiasm and more time towards achieving my dreams and accomplishing my passion.

.... I guess that "pursuing my passion " sounds more appropriate.

I want to become all I could in my education since am still young and has the burning passion to become the best.

.... this line is vague again especially the first section. Why you mention that you are still young? What's its link to this idea. It's not very clear and hence you better re-do this sentence.


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