Finding a degree combining biology, mathematics, and technology has always been my dream. Biomedical systems engineering, being a multidisciplinary field, will allow me to design medical innovations that help address complex and incurable diseases such as cancer and to construct prosthetics to improve patients' lives. My long-term goal is to found my company in order to export healthcare technologies to countries with inadequate healthcare infrastructure. The University of Toronto will help me accomplish my long-term objectives by offering research opportunities that will enable me to become an expert in biomaterials and machine learning and by also providing practical experience through internships.
Biology, mathematics, and technology - academic objectives and your long-range goals
Is this a word count limited statement? I am wondering why your response is so curt when the question requires you to develop a full blown response statement in essay format. All I have taken away from this is that you are brainstorming the possible content of your response. Which turns out to be pretty generic and not really well thought out in terms of academic objectives and long term goals. The response should be divided into 2 paragraphs. The first being the academic objectives which should discuss your current academic shortcomings, what your evolving interests are, and how these combined to create a unique academic focus / objective for you. As for the long range career goals, you do not really reflect any. That is the sad part about this response.
@Holt
here is the prompt
Describe your academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals. Please include specifically how a Bachelor's degree from the University of Toronto will contribute to your achieving your longer-range goals. (100 word maximum)
Can you please tell my what to add and what to remove specifically?
here is the prompt
Describe your academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals. Please include specifically how a Bachelor's degree from the University of Toronto will contribute to your achieving your longer-range goals. (100 word maximum)
Can you please tell my what to add and what to remove specifically?
In my opinion, you can talk mention the specific courses/modules you would want and how they relate to your futures goals. You could also choose a specific problem and talk about how it needs a multidisciplinary approach.
You need to show the specific things university of Toronto had that would help you align with your Long-range goal, you could mentioned specific labs, professors, or programs.
