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AN ESSAY OF MY CONTRIBUTION TO HOME COUNTRY DEVELOPMENT AFTER MY STUDIES ABROAD FOR A SCHOLARSHIP



RichieRaph 1 / 1  
Apr 18, 2022   #1
Kindly help me with a feed back if I am on point. Thanks

PROMPT:

Evidence how studying at the (University name) will help you contribute to the development of your home country.



There is no doubt over the years my home country, has produced one of the best economic growth in Africa. However, there would always be room for improvement as shortfalls have been severely addressed with regards to financial challenges, high rate of unemployment, skills mismatch, Low productivity due to poor human capital development, etc. I intend to contribute to the development of business awareness for university students and help to improve the stability of our economy.

After I earn a qualification in MSc accounting and finance from one of the best Universities in the world: (University Name), I have a plan to secure a place with one of the leading financial institutions, preferably a private sector financial organization that I intend working with for about two years to further broaden my skill set as well as improve my personal character acquired during my study in the UK. Upon my return to my country Ghana, I will seek the opportunity to arrange with university authorities from various institutions to schedule and organize educative programs where I will get the chance to share with the students my skills, knowledge and professional experience gained overseas. I will share with them an in-depth global implication of the course they have chosen to study and help to provide assistance in its application in the job market geared towards developing business awareness for the students and how it can contribute to the improvement of the economy. In that regard, I will seek the opportunity to render my service as a teaching assistant in one of the universities to continue helping the students with all that I gained from the UK.

It has always been a huge part of my plan to undertake a PhD program. I understand the PhD program in accounting and finance will further boost my analytical skills and enhance my research approach. The rationale for undertaking this program is to learn from professionals who have gained real life experience from the field and have applied towards economic development in the UK. Immediately upon completion of this program, I will return to my country and have a place as a qualified lecturer and researcher in a university to help produce highly intelligent qualified and well informed professionals from the field of accounting and finance. Also, I will seek for a place at higher office in the financial sector of government where I can exhibit my expertise on advising the government on financial matters to help make better decisions relating to financial trends

Throughout my time in the UK, I will not be limited to only my field of study but to build a professional network of people from all around. My intention is to ensure that the people I connect with are willing, able and have the potential to invest in businesses in the near future. The idea is to provide all the necessary assistance required for these people to invest in businesses in my country to help the growth of our economy. In addition, I will establish an advisory firm to render a professional consultation service on funding guidance and related services mostly to startup businesses to help graduates who embark on entrepreneurship.

I believe my plans will benefit university student in my country to be well equipped and prepared towards the job market and contribute massively to the development of our economy. I hope during the course of contribution towards development in my country, much will be demanded of me than the aforementioned.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Apr 19, 2022   #2
The writer has too many future plans in every paragraph. It has gotten to the point where his plans do not offer a solid development plan. He tends to confuse the reasons for his contribution to Ghana with future academic plans. The PhD presentation does not align itself with the requirements. Niether does the idea of developing his character as he developed during his time overseas.

The ideas are too cluttered to show a true benefit once he contributes to the field at home. Narrow down the discussion to 3 ideas instead:

- Academic contribution to future graduates
- Local economy contribution
- Potential for national economy contribution

It is important to have a doable implementation plan along with contribution ideas. Do not get too excited by the ideas you have. Be serious and discuss the projects that you can actually accomplish based on the above list.
OP RichieRaph 1 / 1  
Apr 19, 2022   #3
MSc

Thank you sir

I will do as you have directed


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