Prompt: Please explain why you have chosen the major/program and the university that you intend to study. How do you plan to use your education from this major in the future? Character with spaces- 3000 max
'I have a dream' , Martin Luther King's iconic line, aimed at uprooting the discrimination against his people. My dream, though quite different from his as it emphasizes education equality, shares the same implicit intention. Ever since I was young, the joyous thing I would do as my pastime was to explain math problems to other fellow students in unconventional ways. This spark followed me to 2022 when it exploded into a burning passion to be an educator that is involved in addressing the challenges faced by my community and country. To transform this dream into an attainable goal, I have chosen to pursue the Arts of Program in Education at APIU university.
The choice of the Arts of Program in Education is mainly because my passion for being an inspirational teacher resonates with sustainable goals that I have in mind for those in need. Reflecting on my childhood, the desire to influence and reshape others' thinking was ingrained in me. This conviction still has not changed even when I turned 18, and I believe that by taking up this program, it would prepare me in understanding the legal, ethnical, policy issues of education which develop the ability to learn and adapt to the changing educational community. and other aspects of education such as the philosophical and social foundations of education, integrating instructional technology in the classroom, and diverse methodologies are of utmost crucial because the knowledge I will receive from these will be the foundation for future development educational projects. My goal as a teacher is to contribute to inequality in educational opportunities we see today and once I reach my goal, I will thrive more than being an educator, I will be an investor, a guide and most importantly, a leader. With my passion and leadership skills, I believe that I can leave a positive impact by collaborating with a team to design and invest in projects.
APIU University, at first glance, is a perfect fit for me due to its detailed curriculum aligning with my vision of uplifting the educational system. Furthermore, the fact that they provide field trips for observation purposes, research and internships to get hands-on experience for applying theoretical knowledge in real situations stands out to me.
By the time I complete the program, I plan to take advantage of my education to implement my vision for the specific needs of my community first. I plan to use this scholarship to advocate for increased access to quality education in rural areas making use of technology such as language learning apps or online platforms that focus on the educational content in various languages spoken across Myanmar, creating a positive learning environment for other ethnicities. Also, by gaining linguistics and language education from this program, I aim to collaborate with experts and educators to make courses that suit the diversity of people from different backgrounds.
My journey at APIU is not just about obtaining a degree; it's about acquiring the knowledge, skills, and insights needed to reinforce positive change in the education sector. My dream, similar to Martin Luther King's pursuit, just needs a helping hand to be realized into a goal.
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Please help me with this essay. I really need help since my deadline is close.
Does it cover all the prompts?
Does it deliever properly to the prompts according to it's mission and vision?
Also, the problem is that my essay character exceeded the given limit. I tried my best to edit and omit out some info. Which part should I fix and omit so that the intention of this essay isn't affected while managing the character limit?
-These are the vision and mission.
VISION
Educated and empowered people responsibly shaping and sustaining fair, just and healthy societies for generations to come.
MISSION
We exist to ensure that children and young adults in the Mekong Sub-Region, affected by inequality, grow up to be healthy and have access to quality education and better employment opportunities. Everything we do enables them to live empowered and self-determined lives as equal and active members of society, with the potential to become responsible leaders of change.
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4785 The opening paragraph is unnecessary. It does not help the essay move along. When writing a character limited essay, every paragraph should move the essay forward. You can opt to start with the second paragraph instead and have a more effective effect on the reviewer than if you included the first paragraph. It will also help you meet the character count since the presentation will become more information efficient to the reader.
is a perfect fit for me due to its detailed curriculum aligning with my vision of uplifting the educational system
Which parts of their curriculum are those? Show a familiarity with the program. These vague references need to actually be discussed in a proper comparison format. Your ideas in comparison to the school offering.
they provide field trips
Why does this stand out to you? Please develop that paragraph further.
