Engaging with the network of Mastercard Foundation Scholars

Am still trying to work on the introduction and then also i seek to make some additions too. please suggestions for how i can start the introduction and additions i can make will be accepted. i will also appreciate constructive criticisms and grammatical corrections.

contribution to the network of MCF scholars

How would you continue to engage with the network of mastercard foundation scholars and how do you envisage the network may help you in the future.

The network of MasterCard foundation scholars enables students to meet and exchange ideas and most importantly forge a common identity. Therefore it is very vital to stay connected.

I hope to stay connected to this network of influence via different social media platforms like twitter, facebook and LinkedIn. Asides that I will identify with the university alumni services so I can keep in touch with all members of the network across the globe. At opportune times I could also attend reunions to help strengthen old bonds and relationships. i also plan on forming business links with colleagues and superiors in my field of specialisation.

I stand to believe that my net worth is not the amount of assets I have nor the size of my capital but the size and quality of my network. The benefits of identifying with a global network of life changing personals are vast. I envision engagement in this network will be totally beneficial to my career. Effective engagements in this network will open doors to new opportunities for business, personal growth and career advancement. Active participation in this network will further widen my support network; I get to discuss issues and challenges with more experienced peers and superiors.

Ameh, the responses that you gave are pretty much run of the mill. There is nothing new and these are expected already of the alumni. That is why you have a difficult time creating a response. You have to think of other ways to stay engaged with the other scholarship graduates after you graduate. Think of alumni projects in your country that can help you engage the sponsored graduates in a manner of speaking. Your first sentence in this essay is unnecessary as you are merely repeating what the prompt topic is about. Start directly with a response. Use the unique method of keeping in touch with the members of the scholarship at the top of the essay and push the expected answers, that is, the current 2 paragraphs to the bottom of the page. That way you have more room to discuss a networking situation that will be of interest to the reviewer.

Thank you very much for your response Holt. But please could you elaborate more on the alumni project you talked about?..