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i have write an essay to apply the scholarship, my essay write are follow the question on scholarship form, so i need you to help me to edit with grammar error, punctuation and any error, i am really appropriate your help and thank you in advance.
here my essay
European is the most popular place and destination study for students around the world dream want to study in one of European union member, but there are some problem for all of students have face are paying for they study course, travel, accommodations etc., include me I dream to study in one of European counties as well but I don't have money to cover on my study and living cost if I don't apply to scholarship. EMA2 give me a good opportunity to participate with European countries by give me a chance to apply for scholarship to cover my study, travel, and living expense in European universities which partnership with EMA2. While participating in your program I expect to gain something bigger than merely another academic degree. I expect that this 2 year program can help me to learn more and understand how different methods can be applied in urban development in different countries. To participate with EMA2 I have bring my strengthens skills and abilities such as computer skills, my English Skills both Writing, Reading, Speaking and Listening are well, because I have graduated from Bachelor Degree in English of Literature, so I can show that my English skills is strong enough for participate with the program course I have chosen at host university. For my work experience I had worked as a English and Computer Teacher since I study in year two until year four, after graduated in July, 2011 I had worked at International Peace Organization as volunteer position location at Siem Reap province, and after finish my volunteer work I had apply to Consultancy company and work as direct assistance and website banner design at V1HR, Consulting, co,ltd,.
By join with EMA2 I have interest apply to English and Literature because it close and relate to my bachelor degree so it will enable me to deep understand when lecturer explain and easy to study because I have study some model in bachelor level ready. English and Literature is my first choose course because I like to read many English novel was written by many famous author in the world such as Edward Albert's, James Joyce's...etc., so I really deep interest with English and Literature too much, I am also like to write a novel story because when I write a novel I can improve my writing skills as well.
My commitment after completed my study is i will return to my home country and will join with government to develop my country education system more modern like European countries system as well by apply to work with public sector or private sector and cooperate with each other to develop my country as well as like European countries.
Study abroad it is my dream and it will best benefit for me too much such as experience abroad by going to study at university I have dream about and I can get many experience from abroad such as making friends which come from different background, practice our English skills, sharing our culture to each other, improve my research skill, improve my academic skill, improve my speaking and communication skill by talking to other students in the class improve my social skills by join with students club and going to meet local people in area of my study. It also will give directly to my social economic environment up on I return to my country I will bring all my knowledge to share with my family, friends, my co-worker especially with my next generation so when they get benefit from me they will share to other people as well that it really good for my country to have people have knowledge to share to each other.
My preferred start date is September 1st, 2014 and my academic duration is 2 year full Master degree program at Masaryk University.
i have write an essay to apply the scholarship, my essay write are follow the question on scholarship form, so i need you to help me to edit with grammar error, punctuation and any error, i am really appropriate your help and thank you in advance.
here my essay
European is the most popular place and destination study for students around the world dream want to study in one of European union member, but there are some problem for all of students have face are paying for they study course, travel, accommodations etc., include me I dream to study in one of European counties as well but I don't have money to cover on my study and living cost if I don't apply to scholarship. EMA2 give me a good opportunity to participate with European countries by give me a chance to apply for scholarship to cover my study, travel, and living expense in European universities which partnership with EMA2. While participating in your program I expect to gain something bigger than merely another academic degree. I expect that this 2 year program can help me to learn more and understand how different methods can be applied in urban development in different countries. To participate with EMA2 I have bring my strengthens skills and abilities such as computer skills, my English Skills both Writing, Reading, Speaking and Listening are well, because I have graduated from Bachelor Degree in English of Literature, so I can show that my English skills is strong enough for participate with the program course I have chosen at host university. For my work experience I had worked as a English and Computer Teacher since I study in year two until year four, after graduated in July, 2011 I had worked at International Peace Organization as volunteer position location at Siem Reap province, and after finish my volunteer work I had apply to Consultancy company and work as direct assistance and website banner design at V1HR, Consulting, co,ltd,.
By join with EMA2 I have interest apply to English and Literature because it close and relate to my bachelor degree so it will enable me to deep understand when lecturer explain and easy to study because I have study some model in bachelor level ready. English and Literature is my first choose course because I like to read many English novel was written by many famous author in the world such as Edward Albert's, James Joyce's...etc., so I really deep interest with English and Literature too much, I am also like to write a novel story because when I write a novel I can improve my writing skills as well.
My commitment after completed my study is i will return to my home country and will join with government to develop my country education system more modern like European countries system as well by apply to work with public sector or private sector and cooperate with each other to develop my country as well as like European countries.
Study abroad it is my dream and it will best benefit for me too much such as experience abroad by going to study at university I have dream about and I can get many experience from abroad such as making friends which come from different background, practice our English skills, sharing our culture to each other, improve my research skill, improve my academic skill, improve my speaking and communication skill by talking to other students in the class improve my social skills by join with students club and going to meet local people in area of my study. It also will give directly to my social economic environment up on I return to my country I will bring all my knowledge to share with my family, friends, my co-worker especially with my next generation so when they get benefit from me they will share to other people as well that it really good for my country to have people have knowledge to share to each other.
My preferred start date is September 1st, 2014 and my academic duration is 2 year full Master degree program at Masaryk University.
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