GKS - Study plan. One year of Korean language course

Language study plan

I'm going to split my study plan about the language into two categories, the first one is what i'm doing until i will depart for the S. Korea and the second is what I plan to do with the year of the Korean language course.

Before come to South Korea

King Sejong Institute online beginner 1A course completed.
Following the Sejong 2 online course offered by the Italian - Korean cultural center.
I Joined study groups and hired a personal tutor online to practice the language.
I listen podcast about korea in Korean and there are some useful channel speaking korean in a beginning level
Once the Beginner course is finished, registration for the 95th Topik exam which will be held on July 13-14, 2024.

One year of Korean Language Programme

1 semester e 2 semester - autumn - winter 2024 → Topik 2 level 3
Enroll in a Korean Language Institute and continue the learning of the level 1 and begin the level 2
Study new words and practice and interact with native Korean speakers.
Partecipe at cultural tour to learn about Korean tradition, Arts, and Culture
Join language exchange programs to learn from other students while sharing Italian culture.
Interact with Koreans and other foreigners by participating in volunteer activities.
At this level:
1. I can express my thoughts during basic conversation/discussion and be understood by native Korean speakers. Discussion of familiar topics employing a vocabulary of about 2000 words. Distinguishing correctly between formal and informal situations.

2. At the end of the second semester I have fully adapted the formal and informal structure of Korean sentences while increasing confidence in conversation with native speakers. Carrying out transactions with people in public spaces and maintaining social relationships. Understanding the correct usage of words and speech. I will have a command of fundamental characteristics of the Korean language.

One at a time.

This is a good outline. However, you need to edit it for spelling errors and English word usage. You might also want to add more personal insight into your experience when it comes to learning the language prior to arrival. That way you can let the reviewer know or see the depth of your seriousness when it comes to learning Hangul. Comments from your private tutor could help as well. You seem to be serious about this so you should make sure to highlight as much of your undertakings as you can.

For the arrival in Korea part, you should change the reference to future tense. These are things you hope to accomplish in the future. So just correct the time reference for this part and also, make it more conversational in presentation.

Your essay looks good but yeah check your tenses and try to express a little more before coming to Korea it's good but try to write and explain how you studied what you learned like that. I am not a consultant so it's just my opinion.

I Joined study groups and hired a personal tutor online to practice the language.
I listen podcast about korea in Korean and there are some useful channel speaking korean in a beginning level

if it is a plan then u should use future tense, not past like Joined, or at least of u have done one of your task then u should use present perfect: i have ..., further more, it is i will listen to podcast about ..., not i listen podcast about korea.

Thanks, it was the first draft so i didn't really put a lot of effort in the grammar side of this essay. I'm going to review and add more specific parts in this essay.