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leadership power
Talking about my greatest strength, I have very appreciable leadership skills within myself. From my childhood to the present day, I have been given various opportunities to exercise the power of a leader. I have experienced successful democratic leaderships through being president on various clubs in school life, playing on intra-school cricket team, and even the organizer and team leader of various community service programs. However, I am not good at doing multitasks at the same time, but would love the opportunity to change it.
Holt Educational Consultant - / 15460 Aashish, what is the character or word requirement for the statement? The statement about you being a leader should be adjusted to offer a quick example, in summary form of a time when you proved to be a leader in order to create a basis or foundation for your claim regarding your strong leadership skills. As for the multitasking weakness, it also requires that you show an example of this failure. It would be best if you present your weakness before the strength that you have. As in all statements and essays, you would want to close the information on the strongest note, not the weakest, in support of your application. Overall, the responses are quick and accurate, but lacking in proper response development. The response development has to to do with the example of a strength and weakness as I explained earlier in my observation of your work. Make sure to say within the maximum word count (if required) when you adjust your response.
@ Holt Thank You for your points!! I will surely add an example about my failure as you said. Also, since it is an interview question mailed to me by university, I honestly do not have any idea on how long it should be.
Holt Educational Consultant - / 15460 Will this be a question that you have to respond to via an online application? Or do you have to mail it in via postal mail? If you have to send the response electronically, then check the application box for the prompt requirement. It should be specified there. If it is to be returned via postal mail, then you have to contact the university to be sure of the word or character count. Normally, a one page response is sufficient enough to discuss the questions provided. Usually between 2-4 paragraphs. However, the university may have a specific requirement so you should be sure to double check with them first. If it seems like there is really no requirement, then you can use the standard 2-4 paragraph response for this essay. 2 paragraphs for the strength and 2 paragraphs for the weakness. That will allow you to properly discuss and inform the reviewer in terms of your response to the prompt. If you find out that there is a word requirement from the university, then work within the limitation parameters for your response revision.
As I learned how to answer 'your weakness' question, I think it's better if you explain the way you fight your weakness through the opportunity that you have already experienced not in the way you are waiting for the opportunity to experience it. Hope it'll help.
Hi! suggest to use real life example to illustrate your strengths. Perhaps you can also elaborate more about what do you mean by leadership power, e.g. what quality do you possess in order to claim yourself a good leader?
Same comment as weaknesses; do elaborate more and maybe state more clearly how do you intent to overcome your weaknesses
Hope this helps.