Learning SPANISH; Subjects in which you excel

The many different cultures that have derived throughout the history of the human race interested me at a young age. However, cultural studies did not appeal to me until I entered the Spanish program at Indian Creek Middle School. I realized that the Spanish cultures interested more than any other intellectual achievements in the eighth grade. My middle school Spanish teacher, Mrs. Rebecca Perez, personally acknowledged that I would succeed if I ever decided attend to a career in Spanish cultures. My interests increased when I entered Spanish I my sophomore year in high school, and Mrs. Lin Lindsay challenged each one of her students to excel in all of her classes. Due to my success in middle school Spanish, I did not think that it was necessary for me to excessively study for any of the assessments. However, that was an invalid observation. On a verb quiz my second week in Spanish I, I made a grade that did not meet my expectations nor my parents expectations. Mrs. Lindsay informed me after class that she was disappointed in me, because she was "expecting great things from me." From that point on, I studied for Spanish just as much as I did for every other class I was taking. Throughout high school, I received much recognition for my success in the Spanish language. I was awarded the Academic Achievement Award for Spanish II, considered for an advanced Spanish III class, and currently withhold a ninety-eight average in Spanish III. I also tutor friends of my own who are taking Spanish I and II.

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