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Master in IT project Management - knowledge and skills important to Botswana's development



palePale 1 / 2  
Feb 4, 2023   #1

1.Why are these knowledge and skills important to your country's development?


Computer science and Technology are the fastest-growing industries in the world. Modern-day Technology such as software, computers, and Networks has replaced obsolete Technology. Modern-day Technology has made jobs easier and faster for employees, employers, leaders, and innovators.

In first-world countries, Modern-day technology has vastly impacted the growth of other industries such as Agriculture, Health, Defense. Botswana is known for its Agricultural Industry And Mining Industry and has Over the years rapidly grown in these sectors leaving a cosmic gap for Computer science and Technology. Although Botswana has surprised the world and its citizens, unlike the first world Countries their method of managing these popular sectors has remained stagnant due to low and variable rainfall, pest outbreaks, unskilled labor, dangerous working environment, and very hot temperatures.

Studying master in IT project Management will help Botswana adapt to new technologies such as robots, and drones to control diseases and pests, improve food security, improve food production, reduce environmental harm, reduce energy consumption, and also increase the chances of minerals being discovered.

One at a time.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15466  
Feb 5, 2023   #2
When a direct question is asked, the response must deliver a direct answer as well. That means, long winded introductions are unnecessary in the statement. That said, the first paragraph of this response can be safely removed. It will not affect the later paragraphs since the introduction is unrelated to Botswania and its technological backwardness. The current last 2 paragraphs in the presentation are the most direct responses to the query. The second paragraph works just fine. However, the last paragraph can use further development. Try to develop a more complex explanation that will prove the importance of the knowledge and skills in these areas to your country. It just does not feel completely developed at this point since it is just a single long sentence. It is not even a complete paragraph. So that paragraph can use further explanatory sentences. By the way, do not capitalize words that are not proper nouns. That is incorrect written grammar.
Tutu000 1 / 2  
Feb 11, 2023   #3
Good content, you've mentioned the problems in your own country and most likely how they can be addressed. Try to write more of a single opinion with factual back ups.


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