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Motivation letter for EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI - Review Request



mepawan7 1 / -  
Nov 5, 2024   #1
As a technology enthusiast, AI has always enticed me with its potential to revolutionize societies and improve people's lives. With a Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Science and over five years of professional experience in software development and Devops, I am excited to embark on the journey of pursuing an M.S. in EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI.

My undergraduate studies at xxx college, affiliated with yyyy University, India, provided a solid theoretical foundation. During my coursework, I delved deeply into algorithms and their applications to real-world problems. This blend of theory and hands-on practice in the lab cemented my understanding and ignited a fervent passion for the digital realm. My final semester project, which focused on optimizing product delivery for e-commerce platforms, honed my problem-solving skills and sparked my interest in leveraging technology for societal benefits.

Receiving a 75% college fee waiver due to my commendable high school record alleviated the financial burden of my education and empowered me to excel academically. Beyond academics, my college years enriched me with the diverse tapestry of South Indian culture, fostering personal growth and adaptability.

Driven by the belief that theory alone is insufficient, I sought professional experience to deepen my understanding of software development. Over the past five years, I have worked at xxx and yyy, developing web and mobile applications using frameworks such as Angular, React Native, React, Node, and Rails and also managing their efficient deployment and timely delivery ensuring client satisfaction.

At xxx (contracted through zzz), India, I contributed to the development and maintenance of aaa application, an IT services management system. My responsibilities included redeveloping the UI, integrating APIs, code refactoring, and improving load times, all while following Test Driven Development and Agile methodologies. At yyy, Nepal, I have been involved in various projects, including social media, NFT blockchain, ride booking, and job portals. Implementing real-time messaging features using WebRTC and integrating in-app payment systems are among my notable achievements. In addition to that, I have single handedly deployed Rails apps in AWS cloud utilizing its several services like VPC, EC2, SES, S3 Buckets, Load Balancer, ASG, etc among many from scratch, In short, I have worked as a full-stack developer handling overall development as well deployment of apps.

My professional journey has taught me the importance of well-structured, optimized code and effective collaboration. Guiding young professionals and working with diverse teams from Nepal, India and Japan have further honed my collaborative skills, crucial for research and development.

M.S. EMJM in IPCVAI, with its comprehensive and interdisciplinary curriculum, aligns perfectly with my career aspirations. Courses in Intelligent Systems, Algorithm Analysis, and Operating Systems will build upon my foundational knowledge and professional experience, enabling me to tackle complex challenges through a deep understanding of basic principles.

The future of computer science excites me with its endless possibilities. With my academic background and professional experience, I am well-equipped to explore uncharted territories and thrive in collaborative environments. I am a self-motivated, curious, and hardworking individual, committed to driving innovative solutions.

I believe computer science can bridge the intelligence gap in societies, allowing people to make better decisions and revolutionize lives. With the goal of contributing to this transformative field, I am eager to join MS in EMJM IPCVAI. I look forward to the opportunity to learn, grow, and make a meaningful impact.

Thank you for considering my application. I am hopeful for a positive response from the selection committee.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15476  
Nov 5, 2024   #2
I do not get the vision that you have for pursuing the course which could have resulted in the motivation that pushed you to apply for this scholarship. The opening statement that you wrote is not really interesting and does not provide an interesting hook that would make the reviewer want to get to know more about you. Every person with an interest in computers claims to be a technology enthusiast. AI is quite a new technology that the statement you made about it is empty and irrelevant to the previous statement. You need to fix that paragraph and fast. Paragraph 3 is not really a necessary part of an EM motivational letter. You will be considered for the scholarship based on the same criteria as everyone else, who are also previous scholars of other programs so your claim is not going to make an impression either.


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