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I'm an oustanding person who contains all the qualities -Why I deserve a scholarship?

ohitstanya 1 / 1  
Aug 28, 2011   #1
I'll be turning in an essay for my scholarship grant for college.
I hope that you could actually help me edit some stuffs you know.

"Always do your best. What you plant now, you will harvest later". That quote is undoubtedly true.

When I was young, I would come up with some business ideas and I'd asked my friends to help me accomplish it. I also help my parents with our small business. Through the years, I have been interested in doing business. Gradually, I realized that I want to be part of the actual business world someday. I had Entrepreneurship classes before and last year I had Business Management as a part of our school's curriculum; I even top my Business Management class for straight four quarters. The experiences that I had with my Entrepreneurship and Business Management class cultivated my passion for having a career in the field of Business. Essentially, I firmly believe that I have the courage and passion to pursue the career that I want.

Moreover, through some career and school searching, I was able to learn about Enderun Colleges. Ever since, I've learned about it, attending Enderun has been my fondest dream. I'd love to experience the high-quality curriculum system of Enderun and its Exceptional facilities and top calibre faculty.

Becoming part of the Enderun community is surely a great honor. I can assure you that I have what it takes to be an Enderun student and not just an ordinary student but rather a well rounded individual. As far as I know myself, I am a diligent and motivated individual with fine goals. Based from my experiences, I can balance my academics and extracurricular activities. Within me lies a good leadership skill too. If granted, the scholarship will give me an opportunity to further my education without having to worry so much about finances and especially take a step closer to success. I will make the best use of the scholarship to succeed in garnering a capacious array of knowledge and endeavour to become a beacon of edification to our society.

"Therefore, I am worthy of this because I am an oustanding person who contains all the qualities a scholarship student should posess."
OP ohitstanya 1 / 1  
Aug 29, 2011   #2
it's actually longer than what is asked. the essay should be 300 words or less. I still have to shorten it. :) but, thanks!

@ MAIThank you! I really appreciate it :) By the way, should desire be desired?

Mai Chu 14 / 17 1  
Aug 29, 2011   #3
Oh yeah, you correct me too :D

Thank Tanya Arado!

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