What are your plans upon graduation from college or graduate school?
After graduating, I want to work for a global industry that will offer opportunities to travel abroad. I want to stretch my intellectual and creative horizons in diversity and utilize my talent in medical application around the world. While doing so, I plan to meet the needs of the fatherless children by giving selflessly for the needs of those families. Additionally, I would like to start a scholarship foundation for those children and encourage them to strive for higher education. Lastly, I aspire to be in a TED talk. I would like to stand on that platform one day and share my story to inspire young students. I will always strive to mature in the virtues of an excellent engineer, so that I can give the best version of me for the next generation of young student while demonstrating the virtues of a proud Aggie.
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