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My proudest accomplishment - the Cambridge Science Competition



mtbee7 1 / -  
Dec 6, 2024   #1
One part at a time.

1) This scholarship aims to support the brightest and best individuals who demonstrate strong ambition and talent.
Describe any outstanding skills or accomplishments you have achieved outside of your academic grades. *
Please use this space to detail any special skills and achievements that highlight your ambition and how you make a difference (1000 characters only)

1)My proudest accomplishment is winning a Gold Award in the Cambridge Science Competition with my friends, where I was allocated to be the team leader due to my academic excellence in the sciences. We conducted experiments and wrote a winning research report. This experience honed my problem-solving and analytical skills while teaching me how to work with and manage a team.
Motivated by this, I initiated a STEM research competition at my high school with my teacher's support. I currently mentor students in refining their ideas, guide their projects, and share insights from my own experience. Witnessing their growing confidence in themselves inspires me to continue fostering a passion for STEM worldwide.
Additionally, I've been recognized for creativity, diplomacy, and public speaking by my 1st place award in the Safiya Bin Zager Art Competition and two Best Delegate awards in Model United Nations. All of which are skills which I believe will support me through my future ambitions.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15451  
Dec 9, 2024   #2
with my friends

Just indicate that this was a team event and you were the group leader. It sounds more professional that way.

my academic excellence in the sciences.

Mention your strongest Science subjects to add to the believability of this claim.

We conducted experiments and wrote a winning research report.

What was the competition about? What experiments were conducted? What did the research report focus on?

I initiated a STEM research competition at my high school with my teacher's support.

What was the competition about? STEM is a vast field. Narrow it down to the specific focus of your competition.

Witnessing their growing confidence in themselves inspires me to continue fostering a passion for STEM worldwide.

Do not exaggerate. Just say you want to support STEM in your home country.

All of which are skills which I believe will support me through my future ambitions.

It would be better for you to not make these claims. What you believe does not matter to the reviewer. Let him decide for himself without you trying to influence his decision.


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