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Relationship-building in a professional capacity - Chevening



abdulrahmanaahma 1 / 2  
Oct 30, 2024   #1
Chevening is looking for individuals with strong relationship-building skills, who will change with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Please explain how you build and maintain relationships in a professional capacity using clear examples of how you currently do this, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.

Relationship-building in a professional capacity is important for the growth and development of individual capability and productivity in any aspect they find themselves.

I have influenced my university colleagues positively. My second year was though for many of them. I decided to create a group of study sessions where I treated every topic with much details, we elaborated on their problems that needed tackling and explained effectively about our progress. This helped majority of them. The level of their performance has increased till graduation. With my partners in school, this has brought about trust, continous relationship and a recognition from them regarding their academic life and development.

A year ago, I started a job as a voluntary official in a private laboratory and consultancy service. I worked with various laboratory scientists, pharmacists and social service providers. Samples were collected from patients to be analysed. As I was tasked to be a reporter to the officials, I ensured I had a heart to heart response from them on what issues made them develop their symptoms and how I can easily help them with further explanation on how to prevent future occurrence.

My colleagues had issues on how reports should be submitted and issued to patients and also go to the board after monthly review. I provided them with satisfactory details on how to present the results of each diagnosis to the patients in a more positive approach. I showed them how reviews can be done by comparing the success of the previous lab works to the recent ones, closing a gap so important.

During my final year, I made contributions to the departmental political development and this made me build interactions with some of my lecturers that people were skeptical about, bringing about a resolution to the case that started a certain movement. I sat with them, discussed and communicated on how I can be relevant to it's resolution. This brought about an indicator of how others can be interactive and understanding with these lecturers after they've been skeptical about them.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15476  
Oct 30, 2024   #2
The presentation does not really reflect effective leadership and influencing skills. The description you provide is more related to your duties and responsibilities, which should never be confused with leadership and influencing. The overall content is totally unrelated to leadership and influencing in the capacity that Chevening requires which is that of a leader and influencer in either a community or professional setting. Since you are trying to gain a scholarship for a masters course, a professional leadership and influencing discussion, reflecting on your ability to be a future leader and influencer on a higher level, should be present in the essay. I would not include any reference to academic leadership or influencing since that is a bubble setting wherein the environment is controlled and you would not have to deal with problems that relate to the scenarios Chevening is looking for.
OP abdulrahmanaahma 1 / 2  
Oct 30, 2024   #4
Relationship-building in a professional capacity is important for the growth and development of individual capability and productivity in any aspect they find themselves. I have consistently demonstrated abilities to establish and maintain relationships in a positive way.
Over the past year, I have successfully fostered strong relationships with interdisciplinary professionals, including laboratory scientists,a pharmacist, and social service providers, while serving as a voluntary official in a private laboratory and consultancy service. Through effective communication and listening, I established trust with patients, gathering insightful feedback on their experiences and concerns. As a key liaison between patients and officials, I facilitated open dialogue, ensuring seamless information exchange and tailored support. By actively seeking feedback and providing personalized guidance, I empowered patients to take proactive steps in preventing future health issues, demonstrating my ability to build a positive approach and drive positive outcomes through collaborative relationships.

I actively participated in seminars, a workshop and a national conference where I engaged myself with peers, mentors and leaders. In the national conference in 2022, I connected with the national association president in Physiology as well as the head of the department of the university of Bayero University Kano as at then. Through this I gained insights, influence and potential collaborations with them in many areas concerned with health benefits, relationships and building connections.
I volunteer as a mentor for a career building initiative for students below my class level. This particular experience gave me the ability to influence their thoughts and decisions regarding their course of study and where they can apply it. This has helped me with an emphatic relationship with them and also created a constructive ability to provide them with relevant feedback where possible. @Holt
Nazifan 1 / 1  
Oct 30, 2024   #5
Few grammatical mistakes. Also didnt mention nothing about chevening
faisalidina 2 / 3  
Nov 1, 2024   #6
You should also try to show how the relationship you have built have improve your professional carrier and how you maintain said relationship
jasminee 2 / 7  
Nov 2, 2024   #7
While you mention gathering feedback from patients and influencing students, it would strengthen your essay to provide more specific examples of how these interactions led to measurable outcomes or changes.
essaycheck24 3 / 4  
Nov 3, 2024   #8
1. You need to show your Leadership and Influence skill on the professional level.
2. Use STAR Framework to structure your essay
3. Explain how your skill on leadership and influence are align and usefull to chevening values


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