About my stay in Sweden - SI Scholarship letter of motivation

what you will gain from your time in Sweden?

Describe how you can apply the knowledge and experience you will gain from your time in Sweden in your organisation/company and/or in your home country/region. (max 1000 Characters)

My stay in Sweden on one hand will help me acquire critical thinking, problem-solving, and writings skills through academic and project writing experiences, which are central to my career advancement as a management consultant in better analyzing organizations' challenges in Africa and proposing adequate and tailored solutions that will allow them to be more functional.

On the other hand, becoming a member of SI Alumni Network will enhance through mentorship and various activities to develop members' professional and leadership skills that will be beneficial for me in the quality of coaching and support I bring to youth under my supervision in my CSO. Also, it is an opportunity to strengthen the collaboration between Sweden and Cameroon by organizing; through my local Alumni network; learning and best practices sharing workshops on "Promotion of a healthy and sustainable environment" between Sweden and Cameroonian youth. These activities will allow both to gain a different perspective.

The response that is required should represent the career path that the applicant will undertake upon his return to his homeland. The work that the applicant will have to handle should clearly refer to the way or method that the knowledge will be applied in the workplace. That means, the applicant must have a post study plan to speak of. The current response fails to represent that plan.

There is no clear application in relation to the knowledge that will be gained as the potential experience is envisioned. Rather the response illustrates only what the candidate hopes to learn and experience, without and clear reason for needing to do so. The response cannot be used due to the lack of relevant discussion. It is imperative that the applicant review the prompt again and respond to the question based on a future application vision rather than a surmising presentation ( in the 2nd paragraph) and an unrelated response (in the 1st paragraph)

Thank you very much for your comment, I will adjust the test accordingly!