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Study in the UK Essay for Chevening - Modules and Access to Research Labs



ryayra 5 / 12  
Oct 28, 2024   #1
Prompt- Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

The UK's advancements in robotics and computer vision make it an ideal environment for an AI professional like myself. Studying there would allow me to connect with startup leaders and innovators, gaining insights on building an AI research institute for robotics in Ghana. The international focus of UK universities also offers opportunities to learn from diverse perspectives, broadening my perspective.
The courses I have chosen cover essential areas such as computer vision, advanced control, machine learning, and robotic navigation. Together, they will equip me to design intelligent, adaptive systems, preparing me to develop autonomous robots for applications in autonomous systems and assistive devices. I am particularly motivated to apply these skills in Ghana's health and agriculture sectors.
Though similar in content, each program offers unique advantages aligned with my professional goals. For instance, the Master's program in Robotics at the University of Sheffield includes a machine learning and data modeling course focused on unsupervised methods, which is essential for creating data efficient solutions to combat data scarcity in Ghana. I am also particularly interested in the opportunities in the Vision Lab, as I would be able to collaborate on cutting-edge research focused on assistive technologies. This environment would allow me to apply my skills in computer vision and machine learning to develop innovative solutions that enhance accessibility.
Additionally, Heriot-Watt University stands out due to Prof. X's expertise in vision-based robotics with a focus on computational efficiency, a critical skill for developing AI in resource-limited settings like Ghana. Finally, the University of Plymouth offers an opportunity to work with Prof. Y, whose research on vision-based robotics in challenging environments aligns with my interest in developing adaptable systems for diverse conditions, from low-light to adverse weather.
The program will be challenging, but my academic and professional backgrounds have prepared me to face it. I earned a First Class bachelor's degree in Electrical and Electronics Engineering, providing a solid foundation for further studies. My knowledge of robotics and computer vision expanded through the Robotics Summer School and the Computer Vision Summer School, where I learned the basics of computer vision. At Robotics Summer School, I programmed semi-autonomous vehicles using ROS, gaining practical experience in robotics and real-time system integration. I also explored advanced topics like 3D vision techniques and trajectory planning, enhancing my ability to develop robots that navigate complex scenarios.
I have also worked on various AI and robotics projects, including developing a deep-learning-powered assistive device for the visually impaired, which reinforced my commitment to creating accessible solutions through machine vision and adaptive AI. Additionally, I contributed to a Visual Question Answering (VQA) model that integrated translation models with a GPT-based question-answering system in Swahili.
In summary, my academic background and practical experiences have prepared me to excel in advanced study at the aforementioned universities. I am eager to apply the knowledge and skills I gain to contribute to impactful projects in robotics and computer vision, particularly in health and agriculture in Ghana.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15458  
Oct 28, 2024   #2
You are over writing and losing the interest of the reviewer. For the 2nd time, let me remind you, you only have 10 minutes at the most to gain the attention of the reviewer and make him interested in what you are writing. You have to be course and university specific in the information you provide. This will be an essay that is in bullet form, but without the bullets indicated. It is still paragraph form. While your introduction is good, you need to be specific as to your specific academic training and professional exposure with each masters course you choose, regardless of the university. That tends to get confusing in this discussion because you are making it a general discussion of your skills in terms of course choices. You cannot do that with Chevening. You have to be course, experience, and academic specific in your discussion. You have to clearly show how each course will be applied to your career once you complete the course. Regardless of which course you win the scholarship for. Stop over writing. Stick to the format. Do not write this as your academic biography because that is not what the reviewer is looking for.
OP ryayra 5 / 12  
Oct 28, 2024   #3
@Holt
Thank you so much Holt.


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