Sustainable management to address business impacts (Chevening - Studying in the Uk essay)

STUDYING IN THE UNITED KINGDOM:

outline why you have selected your chosen three academic courses, and explain how this is related to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

Environment and Sustainability have always been my field of focus, through my practice I experienced a management position, which is an area that I wish to enhance. United Kingdom offers an educational experience that I would not be able to have in my country, backed up with active research, teaching quality and integration of teaching and practice. That is why I have decided to study in United Kingdom to achieve my goals.

My higher education and professional development was shaped through my experience in the field. My Bachelor's Degree was in Environmental Science and to further expand my knowledge, I obtained a Master's Degree in Technology and Energy Sustainability, a more specific area. My professional career started with environmental consultancies and my current position is in environmental management. Since I have a lot to learn in Management, I consider that it would be a great opportunity to pursue a master's that focuses on environment, sustainability and management in United Kingdom.

As my first choice, I have chosen MSc Management and Corporate Sustainability at Cranfield. This master's degree fulfills my academic and practical requirements for my professional development. It addresses a "triple-bottom-line" approach, as well as challenging the student to think critically in finance and sustainability within a corporate context that will give me a competitive advantage. This masters can benefit me greatly in terms of achieving an integrated knowledge in management by designing solutions to address current corporate sustainable challenges and be an agent of change in the Environmental corporate field.

My second option, is an MSc in Corporate Sustainability and Environmental Management at University of York. The focus on Ethical Sustainability complements my expertise in Environmental Management. This approach will help me analyse the risks associated with activities that impact climate change and responsible decision making to benefit social responsibility within organisations. Data analysis is key to establish a project and track its improvements. Undergoing this master's will allow me to become a change agent within any organisation.

MSc Sustainability and Environmental Management at Coventry University is my third choice. This degree focuses on the roll that environmental policy and social responsibility plays is sustainability. It provides a global view on how a manager could help an organisation achieve international sustainability programmes. Additionally, it provides management and auditing programmes that will give me a competitive advantage in all sectors. This MSc provides an insight as to what roll plays global environmental policy in guiding government and non-government organisations.

All three courses provide a combination of industry integrate meetings, case studies, practices, and seminars with industry's professional that allow network opportunities. As and Environmental Scientist with field and administration experience, I want to develop skills in other areas of Integrated Sustainable Management and these courses will broaden my knowledge and give me bases to challenge myself in designing solutions to address sustainable business impacts that allow me to grow and contribute as a sustainability manager in my country.

Hello,

i don't think you have mentioned the link between your academic/past experience and the courses you've chosen, maybe in the 2nd choice you did a bit where you said it complements your experience in envirotemntal management , while even tho this is not fully sufficient in the other two i believed lacked this relevance part.

Hi,
I think you did a great job already

re-read to check typo. e.g. "... on the roll that ..."

maybe you can also state why studying sustainability in UK is good, better put some data maybe, in comparison to your country. or maybe some other sustainability success in UK that has not yet achieved in your country. it will convince the readers that you did a deep research already and that you're highly motivated for this.

good luck

Double check your grammatical errors. There are wrong punctuation, forgotten articles (the, a, an), and other errors. I suggest you run it through an online proofreader to get rid of those grammatical errors.

Best of Luck

Ana, considering that you have a strong academic and professional background in the field of interest, I was expecting to read a more definitive reason for your university and course choices. Specifically, I would have liked to have read about your current professional duties and responsibilities as these apply to your chosen course. As you very well know, you are being asked to justify the future career application for your course choices, which you have indicated in the paragraphs. However, the professional foundation for your choice is unclear.

It is always assumed that your university course choice is based upon a current professional need or responsibility that you feel you neglect to fulfill or that you can perform better in with proper academic and practical training. I only see a sense of how the course choice will help you in the future, but not why you have chosen the course at the moment. It isn't just about what you hope to learn, but how your current professional actions have helped to prepare you for this course.

The baseline for the course completion capacity on your part is signified by both the academic and professional foundations on your part. Strengthen the professional aspect in order to build an even stronger essay.