Women in Science and Engineering/ Educational and Career Goals

Prompt: Essay with information about yourself including your educational and career goals, what events helped you determine your intented college major, and any information that you believe might be helpful.

Since childhood I always imagined myself with a worthy career and being a professional. Currently that desire has not changed. My biggest goal is to obtain a career where I can express my love for science and at the same time help people around the world. After considering many other career opportunities such as Psychology and Dance then I realized my true passion was science. To be completely sure all of this I decided to assist an internship program of science. During the program I did many tasks involving Biology, Chemistry, Engineering and many others. There I discovered my love for the laboratory and the study of microscopic organisms. That's why I decided to major in Microbiology. I had many options to major but this one caught my attention. I want to be related to the medical field and I know Medical Microbiology works with the study of diseases pathology and immunology. During my undergraduate years I want to work in all possible research because I know they will help me to gain the experience I need. After having gained all experience available such as laboratory assistant and internship programs I desire to enter medical school. Subsequently I want to make a concentration in Molecular Pathology.

I don't know what else to add.

Such as psychology and Dance. Then I relized that my true passion is in science...
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After considering many other career opportunities such as Psychology and Dance..
To be completely sure, all of this I decided to assist..

Add more about your love for the laboratory and microscopic organisms. What about these things do you love? Why are you passionate about them? How do you plan to use these things in the future?

I think you should go into a little more detail on how your love of science, like go into more depth and be more specific as to what area of science you enjoy and discuss a specific example.

Better?

Since childhood I always imagined myself with a worthy career and being a professional. Currently that desire has not changed. My biggest goal is to obtain a career where I can express my love for science and at the same time help people around the world. After considering career opportunities such as Psychology and Dance I realized my true passion was science. To be completely sure I decided to assist an internship program of science. During the program I did many tasks involving Biology, Chemistry, Engineering and many others. There I discovered my love for the laboratory and the study of microscopic organisms. Being in front of diverse organisms analyzing them was what I liked most. And also trying to understand the way they behaved was something that made me think more about their function and existence in the world. That's why I decided to major in Microbiology. I had many options to major but this one caught my attention. I founded this major perfectly for me. The classes were what I was looking for. I want to be related to the medical field and I know Medical Microbiology works with the study of diseases pathology and immunology. During my undergraduate years I want to work in all possible research because I know they will help me to gain the experience I need. After having gained all experience available such as laboratory assistant and internship programs I desire to enter medical school. Subsequently I want to make a concentration in Molecular Pathology. I have big expectations of my future and by this I mean I'd love to work for cancer research. Especially in the Karolinska Institute at Sweden, they are fully committed to lowering the number of people suffering from cancer and discovering how cancer forms. As I said before, I wish to help people using one of the things I love most, science. Research is what I want to do for the rest of my life.

Since childhood, I always longed for being a professional in a worthy career field.


... this sounds a bit rough and also it does not add much value to your essay as an idea. This idea is already said in the previous line.


I wish if you directly expressed what you now want to be.;
After evaluating all my passions and giving serious consideration to all of them, I finally decided a career in Psychology would be the right choice for me.