'academic excellence, location, small student body' - Why Tufts?

Which aspects of Tufts' curriculum or undergraduate experience prompt your application? In short: "Why Tufts?" (50-100 words)

Tufts University strikes me as a school that has it all: academic excellence, an unbeatable location near Boston, and a small student body size that fosters interaction and growth. I am drawn because of Tufts because it offers outstanding programs in engineering but also encourages undergraduates to explore subjects in the School of Arts and Sciences. As a student who has multiple interests, I believe that Tuft's quirky academic climate is the perfect place for me to grow as both an individual and a scholar.

I have read this grow as a person and as an academic before, since this is so common. Try to be original.
"I am drawn because of Tufts because it" that can't be right.
Could you talk a little more about yourself?
Apart from that quite nice.

I would like to invite you to review my revised movie essay.

Theresa

I agree with Max, its kind of common and generic in some instances. Try and talk about yourself. The trick to why X? questions is showing why X is the place for YOU.

Hope this helps!

Theresa

I see you went with humour this time around.

You wanna know why, Tufts?
Something daring/interesting for the intro.

Also try not to just list things. It depletes from the essay and makes it sound like elementary.

Hope this helps.

you could also talk about the jan month where you can travel or pursue something you normall wouldnt have. otherwise its good!

I would appreciate it you could take a look at mine!