My achievements - extracurricular or volunteer activities in which you participate.

Kindly assist me restructure this write-up, kind of confused on how to position them to be error free.

Mathematics competition.

Start date: Wednesday April 27th, 2016.
End date: Saturday June 4th, 2016.
Organisation: Tee Marigold Schools.
Sponsor: Oriade Publications & Printing Press Ent.
Titled: 'Work it Out'
Location: AOCOED International College, Ijanikin.
Description: I trained fifteen students in mathematics of which best ten out of fifteen was selected to compete with about one-hundred and twenty-four other students.

Result: My trainees took the third, ninth and thirteenth position with awards.

CBT implementation

Start date: December, 2013
End date: February, 2014
Organisation: IFOTECH

Description: networking about one-hundred and fifty computers with servers and Cisco switch. I volunteered to work with the team coordinating the work and making sure we beat the deadline mandated by JAMB. Computer Based Test centre was achieved by first creating logical network using Cisco simulator before physical implementation of the project.

Entrepreneurship Program/Summer coaching
Start date: August 1th, 2016
End date: August 19th, 2016
Organizer: Deeper Life nation wide
Role: Resource person/mobile phone technician(Educator)
Description: DLBC nationwide organizes entrepreneurship program during summer of every year. The program started in the year 2010 till date in the month of August before the success camp. In 2010, I was appointed the acting 'captain', in 2012-2014, I was made the resource person, while this year 2016, I coordinated the mobile phone learning program.

Result: those trained can now solve some minor faults on mobile phone.

School outreach program

Start date: March, 2016
End date: still in progress
Organizer: Deeper Life School Outreach(DLSO)
Role: Leadership Training Program (LTP) coordinator
Description: LTP is program organized by DLSO. A scheme designed to train leaders of tomorrow.
Aim: To build youths of distinction that will take up the mantle of leadership both in their various communities, schools, homes, and anywhere they may be found.

Youth Home Success Fellowship(YHSF)
Start date: May, 2016
End date: still in progress- every Sunday evening from 4pm to 5:30pm
Organizer: Deeper Life Youth
Role: leader
Description: a time to converge in a smaller unit to share the word of God, ideas and things related to academics and success.

JET Club: i am a member of Junior Engineering Technician club for secondary school. Science subjects are been taught. Experiences gained out of experiment also shared for others to learn.

UNESCO & GEO PEACE FOUNDATION: I participated in 2013 international essay contest for young people. I earned a certificate of participation.

Are you writing a bullet point resume for your college application? If you are, let me tell you right now, that is not the way to do it. You need to write a chronological essay , that means newest at the top, oldest at the bottom, with specific reference to your extra curricular and volunteer activities.

While you have much experience to speak of, the reviewer will be interested only in the most important or impressive activities you participated in. So, you should review your list and consider which ones you think would best represent you best as a team member or leader. I can't choose that for you because I am not really familiar with the participation that you had. Make your shortlist first and then work on the draft of the essay presentation.

I would suggest that you choose the 3 most important activities. That is because the introduction should give an overview of how you chose these activities and what your character traits are that helped you enjoy the activities. The closing statement should indicate an interest in continuing the said activities while attending the university.

Thanks for your interest in assisting me in this essay. But the question says atleast 5 extracurricular or volunteer activities. That was why i listed five with dates.

It states i should include the start and end dates.

So how do i go about this now?

It isn't hard to fix. Since you are responding to a prompt provided by the university, the correct format for it should be an informative essay. Don't confuse yourself or panic. An informative essay is just what you currently have in bullet form, written in essay form. So you will create a long form of the bullet points to respond to the essay.

Since there is a 5 activity requirement, then go ahead and provide that. I apologize for my mistaken advice earlier as you didn't specify that the university had a number requirement for the essay. Remember to present the essay in chronological order. That means mention your latest participation first, working your way to the oldest or first participation that you have. Just expand all the descriptions in order to help create a more solid explanation of your participation in the activities. Most of the previous instruction I provided still applies.