The guidelines for Florida State for the past hundred years have been "Vires, Artes and Mores".
Why do applicants insist on repeating what is in the question already?
Admissions does not need to know what the guidelines are for their own University.
I believe that i posess imense skill and creativity in the art of television production.
You might want to spell things correctly.
Being in this program for almost four years now,
Being in what program?
Starting out freshmen year i learned basic camera manuevers and became quite familiar with the equiptment.
Capitalize "i" and search up the correct way to spell "equiptment".
For obvious reasons, i signed up for television production my sophmore year as soon as possible.
Sophomore. I.
It ended up being a year based on the idea of us controlling everything.
Reword.
Scriptwriting, lighting, actors, and genre of story all up to us.
Reword.
I know that i would make an excellent addition to the FSU community, and it has always been a dream of mine to be a true Florida State Seminole.
Weak Conclusion.
Your essay is more about Vires than Artes.