describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influences
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Of the variety of characters I have read about and watched on TV, two significant figures stand out that have made an influence in my life. One is known for being cunning, powerful and immortal, holding the ability to morph into 72 objects. The other is acknowledged as one of the greatest military leaders of all time, leading undefeated armies to conquer most of the known ancient Greek world. They are Su Wukong (also known as the Monkey king) and Alexander the Great, both shares a common characteristic of ambition a value I emulate.
During my short visit to South Korea a few summers ago, I was immersed into a new culture and language while site seeing in Seoul. I instantaneously became inspired to learn as much as I can about Koreas rich culture; the mirrored affect took place for Japanese. Learning languages and studying culture has always been my passion since I was young; having Thai and Chinese influences from my parents.
I grew up with a diverse background; my favorite activity that practiced my Thai heritage would have been Thai dancing. I remember practicing every week for the anticipated performance that would be broadcasted on Thai TV, dedicated to the Queen of Thailand's birthday. For my Chinese roots, my dad has been teaching me to speak Mandarin and Cantonese more fluently and in the process we have formed a strong father and daughter bond.
At times studying foreign languages and intensive dance practices felt over whelming. However it can't compare to how daunting it is planning to conquer an empire that doubles the size of ones own, or challenging powerful deities for a place in heaven. That is why I look up to the successes of Alexander and Su Wukong because they're examples of the heights self ambition can take you. It took one aspiration of a young Macedonian prince to become one of the world's greatest conquerors; it took one aspiration of a monkey born from a rock who wanted a place in heaven become one of the most worshiped gods in China; and it takes the aspiration of a young girl to pursue her passion of languages to become a successful multilingual woman in the future. That is why I believe (name of school) would be able to guide me to success and provide me with an experience unique from all the others.
-Hi im finished with my draft but i need some outside input. Also did i answer the question enough in my last paragraph? Thanks!!
Of the variety of characters I have read about and watched on TV, two significant figures stand out that have made an influence in my life. One is known for being cunning, powerful and immortal, holding the ability to morph into 72 objects. The other is acknowledged as one of the greatest military leaders of all time, leading undefeated armies to conquer most of the known ancient Greek world. They are Su Wukong (also known as the Monkey king) and Alexander the Great, both shares a common characteristic of ambition a value I emulate.
During my short visit to South Korea a few summers ago, I was immersed into a new culture and language while site seeing in Seoul. I instantaneously became inspired to learn as much as I can about Koreas rich culture; the mirrored affect took place for Japanese. Learning languages and studying culture has always been my passion since I was young; having Thai and Chinese influences from my parents.
I grew up with a diverse background; my favorite activity that practiced my Thai heritage would have been Thai dancing. I remember practicing every week for the anticipated performance that would be broadcasted on Thai TV, dedicated to the Queen of Thailand's birthday. For my Chinese roots, my dad has been teaching me to speak Mandarin and Cantonese more fluently and in the process we have formed a strong father and daughter bond.
At times studying foreign languages and intensive dance practices felt over whelming. However it can't compare to how daunting it is planning to conquer an empire that doubles the size of ones own, or challenging powerful deities for a place in heaven. That is why I look up to the successes of Alexander and Su Wukong because they're examples of the heights self ambition can take you. It took one aspiration of a young Macedonian prince to become one of the world's greatest conquerors; it took one aspiration of a monkey born from a rock who wanted a place in heaven become one of the most worshiped gods in China; and it takes the aspiration of a young girl to pursue her passion of languages to become a successful multilingual woman in the future. That is why I believe (name of school) would be able to guide me to success and provide me with an experience unique from all the others.