'the best educational experience' - Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech

ShortEssay(1,000 character limit, including punctuation and spacing)
Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech, and what do you hope to contribute to our community?

I believe that a highly prestigious, top ranked institute such as Georgia Tech, with its emphasis on research and technology, excellent faculty and diverse student body will provide me with the best educational experience. My school has always encouraged student all-rounders, and I have always sought to excel in all activities. Apart from participating in numerous Olympiads, taking on leadership roles, and winning science fare awards, my interests and achievements extend to competitive sports. I have represented my school at different competitive levels in soccer, badminton, swimming and track running. I am an active member of my school's social service sector, and I have worked with different philanthropic organisations and orphanages in my city. With its multitudes of clubs and sports teams, Georgia Tech opens many avenues for me to contribute to the college community as part of clubs such as the Soccer Club, Circle K, Photography Club, and RoboJackets (Robotics Club), to name a few.

I'm not really sure how good this is so any feedback will be appreciated :)

Hello,

This essay only focuses on the extra-curricular activities at Georgia Tech. Its ok to include these, but you must also talk about how you will benefit academically from the resources available at Georgia Tech. Also, Science Fare should be Science Fair----A mistake like that would automatically cause your application to be wait-listed if not flat out rejected mainly because you talk about how amazing you are but then fail to catch such a simple mistake. Admissionsessayadvice.com

Thank you so much for the advice. I guess i misunderstood the prompt and focused a little bit too much on the wrong things. I've got a lot of work to do if i want to get everything within this word limit.

Thanks for the help! :)

P.S. That mistake was just plain carelessness, and you're a hero for pointing it out to me. That could've been disastrous!