Being in a book club - only 150 words =)

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Any suggestions? Be harsh! I will take a look at your essay too. =) Thank you!

The fresh scent of paper and the sound of the turning pages welcome me. There is no other activity that quenches my thirst for knowledge more than curling up by the fireplace to read. Every week, the Literature Club members and I gather around to select a book. Last week, I was introduced to Jane Eyre. I instantly connect with Jane, as I have struggled to find my place of belonging in America. I realize Jane and I overcame obstacles in similar manners. As the members and I share our conceptions, different perspectives of the novel are assimilated. Not only am I able to connect with the character, but I also acquire the opinions of the others. Participating in a book club has provided me with pleasure, knowledge, and inspiration to communicate with others intellectually. Our next victim is Emma. I cannot wait to hear how the members regard the proud, but kind and passionate Emma...

Hi,

Its a well-written short essay.
I love how you end it - seems mysterious.
But


Try to replace 'welcome me' with something else. I feel that its not the right word to use. You can try pleases me or soothes your vexed nerves.. Try something.

The rest is all good!

Please have a look on my essay:

Good Luck & Thanks

I understand the usage of "Jane" instead of the more formal and appropriate "Eyre." You want to make it as if you really know her and you are WITH her. I get the point but I do not know if the AdCom will take that as something good.. or not.

I think you should talk more about how it has changed you as a person and how it makes you a better you.

Also with the Emma. I know your goal of writing this way.. but it would be better (?) to clarify her identity a bit. ;)

If you have time, please take a look at mine. Thanks!