"You are born to be a roommate of a weirdo" - Stanford Roommate

As faith has it, you are born to be my roommate. Oh quite the internal whining! We are going to be fine: I get along to virtually everyone. At first, you may find yourself sharing a room with a "freak" and question faith why do this to you, but later you'll find yourself sharing a room with your best friend. I may seem extremely friendly and crazy at first. For example, I might introduce myself with "Hi, my name is Mey Taing. Would you be my friend?" but don't be alarmed by that. I'm just being my eccentric self and am too excited to meet you. As you get to know me more, I promise, my weirdness does not go away, but you'll get used to it.

As you may suspect, my favorite shows are Southpark, Family Guy, and The Simpsons. I am usually on my bed with a bag of extra-buttered popcorn, watching one of these shows after I study or when I am stressed. You are welcomed to join, just remember not to speak while we watch. That being said, I'll bring up my other pet peeve. Please shut the door all the way when you enter or exit the room. If the lock is not clicked, I don't feel secured. I have a tendency to stare at the door and wait for a boggler to enter so that I can smack him with my physics textbook. So please, close it.

About the boggler, if you hear a noise in the kitchen, don't think it's that boggler. I am a night owl. Most likely it's me enjoying my breakfast at 3 a.m and getting ready to start the night with some exciting homework.

I think I talk too much now. If I annoy you in anyway, let it be my talking or my abnormal habits, don't be afraid to tell me. I will try my very best to work something out.

And remember, you can always throw your problems at me, and I'll try to solve them with you. The least I want is an upset roommate.

Yours truly,
An Eccentric Roommate

Please check for any grammar error? and any other input is greatly appreciated it!

Is this supposed to be "quit the internal whining"?


You may want to rephrase this a little bit, maybe to "why did faith do this to you?"


Do you mean burglar?


I believe this should be "You are welcome"


While "clicked" is grammatically correct, you should change "secured" to secure.


I think you should rephrase this, change "let it be", to "be it" or something along those lines. Abnormal has a bit of a negative connotation to it, why not change it to eccentric?

I like you already! This is too amusing, but I think you can improve it a little better.

At first, you may find yourself sharing a room with a "freak" and question faith as to why it led you to this ordeal , but later you'll find yourself sharing a room with a person you can call a best friend .

These are just my eccentric self and my excitement to meet you.

I think I wrote too much now.

If I annoy you in anyway, whether it's my talking or my abnormal habits, don't be afraid to tell me.

The least I want is an upset roommate. (I think you should change this sentence somehow, cause it doesn't sound right?)

All in all, great writing, and good luck!

I think when you say faith you mean fate.

Hmm,
I personally like the letter, but if I was your room mate, I think I'd be scared.
You are welcome to join, but don't speak?
You can remove the 'I am a night owl'. The 'Most likely it will be me etc, answers it already. But then again, you say 'don't think it's a burglar, then say 'most likely it's you' meaning there is a likelihood it could be someone else, then how can your room mate not worry?

But it's honest.. genuine, all the best.

Thanks you guys so much! All the best to you too.