As soon as I heard about Boston, the oldest and biggest city in the U.S., I am convinced it is the perfect city for me and Boston University represents everything about this great city. It is one of the most diverse university in America with more than 100 countries representing the university. It is planted right in the middle of the city center where I can explore the city from the front steps of my dorm. Whilst being a massive university, it is uniquely divided into smaller colleges where a more intimate community can be formed.
Diversity doesn't end with its community but also include their views in learning. The different approach to a medical degree is perfect for me as an aspiring physician that wants to expand his knowledge in the field. Three unique pre-medical programs that allows student to gain a bachelor degree from a choice of three different colleges, all relevant to a career in health-care, will help me become a well-rounded and ecumenical physician. Combine with dedicated specialized pre-professional advisors for health-related careers and an integrated medical program for second year students, Boston has one of the best medical programs in the world.
After my degree, it is my dream to further my knowledge by finding work experiences in as many country as I could before applying for medicine. With Boston's great diversity, I can learn about so many countries' cultures and study towards that degree while also making me feel like I'm not alone in this new country.
Thanks for reading and replying! :)
Should I put my last paragraph somewhere else (ofcourse I should, but where?)
You give a candid description about Boston city and the uni, but you don't tell why and how those features you mention there attract your attention. What's their significance and importance to you?
You need to have yourself in the center when answering because they need to judge the way you perceive things.