STATEMENT 2: Speaking about education, Dr. Martin Luther King once said, "The function of education is to teach one to think intensively and to think critically. Intelligence plus character - that is the goal of true education."
QUESTION 2: Critical thinking is a central goal of Jesuit education, and at LMU you'll be asked to think critically and intensively in every class. Dr. King suggests that critical thinking results in our ability to inform intelligence with character, and strengthen character with intelligence. Please talk about a situation that demanded critical thinking from you, and how your choices or decisions integrated intelligence and character.
DOES IT ANSWER THE PROMPT??
I was torn between the thought of remaining in a hospital bed with a slight chance of getting better or living the remainder of my life the way I wanted to live it. In the year of 2011, I underwent a cancer scare that drastically changed my way of living.
When I was in fifth grade I noticed a lump on my chest and decided to ignore it. The main reasons being fear of the unknown and fear of dying. Throughout the years, It did not really bother me. But that changed once I entered high school. I felt like everyone could tell and judged me because of it. By then I knew more about health issues such as breast cancer and other complications. During the first half of my sophomore year, the words "cancer" and "death" echoed in the back of my mind. I constantly thought about how It eventually started to take it's toll on me. I had kept it all a secret for five years. No one else knew about it. Everyone could see that I was physically and emotionally damaged.
In my mind, I knew that I needed to go to the hospital. The physical pain was getting worse as time passed on. Throughout the whole time I had two thoughts constantly running about it my mind. I remember thinking that If it was breast cancer, I would probably end up in a hospital bed on chemotherapy and I would no longer be able to live my life the way I wanted to. On the other hand, if I did not tell anyone, I would be allowed to live the possible last years of my life normally. I wanted to live, but I did not want to take a chance and spend the remainder of my life miserable on chemotherapy.
Eventually both the physical and emotional pain became too much and it led me to my breaking point. I finally told my parents and we went to the hospital.
A week after the biopsy, the results came in and it was simply a Fibroadenoma. A benign tumor made up of breast gland tissue. In the time in between, I focused on how I had lived my life up until that point. I had always blamed other people for my distaste towards life, I had only lived for myself, and I had never stepped out of my comfort zone. .
Looking back at this cancer scare, I believe I made the right decision. Not only did it prove to me the the unknown is not always something we need to fear, but it also gave life a whole new meaning. This blessing in disguise has sculpt me into the person I am today. If it weren't for this cancer scare, I would still be living my selfish, always on the safe side life. But II appreciate life so much more now. I take time to appreciate the little things. I try to step out of my comfort zone and I try my best to help people every chance I get.
Please Help! Any feedback is very much appreciated!
I will happily help anyone with their essay if they help me with mine!
WOw, this essay is so great that I had to read it twice before I found any errors.
First of all, you answered the question in its entirety.
Here are the few errors I found. This essay is going to melt the hearts of the admission officers. Good luck :).
- By then, I knew more about health issues such as breast cancer and other complications.
- A week after the biopsy, the results came in and it was simply a Fibroadenoma.
- When I was in fifth grade, I noticed a lump on my chest and decided to ignore it.
- If it weren't for this cancer scare, I would still be living my selfish, always-on-the-safe- side life
- I constantly thought about how It (it) eventually started to take it's toll on me. I had kept it all a secret for five years. No one else knew about it.
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