Bucknell Essay; life along with death has always interested me

Can you please read my Bucknell essay this tell me what you think? Any little bit of advice will help.
It is about my major, Biochemistry and why I am interested in it. Thank you sooooo much!

Please explain why you are interested in this major/undecided status:

As an aspiring Forensic Medical Examiner, the study or life along with death has always interested me. Biology has always been a subject that has sparked my interest and because of that, I have always excelled in. My freshman biology teacher, Mr. Zimmerman, first interested me in Biology with his riveting lessons. His passion for the subject made it impossible for others not to love it too. I decided to merge my passion of Biology with Chemistry because I realized with my two years of Chemistry, Chemistry helps you understand why Biology happens the way it does. Bucknell's location, with its Pennsylvanian wildlife along with its intensive science program makes Bucknell and ideal place to study Biochemistry.

I'd take out of the part about Mr. Zimmerman. Right now it seems as if the only reason you like Biology is because of a teacher, which is rather inadequate. It seems like you would enjoy any subject in which there are riveting lectures or passionate teachers. Write about why YOU personally are passionate about it.

These parts can be cut: "with my two years of Chemistry" "and because of that, I have always excelled in" All this info should already be apparent on your transcript. Tell them something that they won't get from the rest of your file.

The last sentence doesn't really answer the prompt. It's asking you why you chose your major, not why Bucknell is the school you chose. You can cut it out and leave more room for elaborating on the actual question.