"Buddhist interested in Jesuit Catholic education" supplement

Hey everyone, I think it's kind of obvious that I suck at writing essays and here's one that I need feedback on. Does it seem too short? What should I add? Any tips?

Why do you feel that Seattle University is a good match with your educational goals?

One of my purposes in life is to explore new things that are beneficial for me. My religion is Buddhism and knowing that Seattle University is a Jesuit Catholic university gives me a feeling that attending this university would be a positive new experience for me. I've always believed that a Jesuit education could enrich my mind-set. When I researched Seattle University, I knew it would be a wise choice for me to take prerequisites for pharmacy school there. Becoming and being a pharmacist requires responsibility and Seattle University's Jesuit tradition could help me develop a sense of responsibility for myself and my community.

I think you need to focus on one of two things.

1. The fact that a Jesuit education appeals to you, a Buddhist.

2. The quality of the pharmacy prerequisite programs.

In this paragraph, you sort of do half-and-half. Just choose one, and expand on it.

Yea...it's a bit short. Now, I'm not sure if this is a short essay or anything, but I would elaborate more on this, if possible. Talk about your religion in a paragraph and then about your wanting to study pharmacy. You should have a rough 4 paragraph, including an ending.