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Promt: In an essay of 300 words, or fewer (approximately 1950 characters with spaces), write about your goals for your time at Queen's University and beyond. Your answer will be evaluated for content and writing style.
Pursuing new knowledge and experience in my area of interest has always been an important goal of my life. I feel that the opportunities and resources offered by Queen's University will allow me to develop new skills and fulfill my lifelong goals. The diverse student body, outstanding professors and the exceptional campus and facilities all contribute to the great appeal of the University to many students, myself included. I believe that Queen's would be a great fit for my aspirations.
My desire to pursue a career in the computing industry stems from my great interest of the increasingly prevalent technology sector. My interest has lead me to do much independant learning and I would like to continue that learning at a world class institution such as Queen's. In the next four years of my life I would like to receive the best education possible. The Queen's computing program would help me achieve that. My goal is to not only achieve high academic grades but also gain valuable experience that will benefit me in the future. The Queen's Undergraduate Internship Program, a program unique to Queen's, is a opportunity I am looking forward to. This program will allow me to gain the practical experience and skills that I will apply in my future career.
I consider post-secondary education to be one of the most important steps of my life and I hope that I can have the privilege of furthering my education at Queen's.
Promt: In an essay of 300 words, or fewer (approximately 1950 characters with spaces), write about your goals for your time at Queen's University and beyond. Your answer will be evaluated for content and writing style.
Pursuing new knowledge and experience in my area of interest has always been an important goal of my life. I feel that the opportunities and resources offered by Queen's University will allow me to develop new skills and fulfill my lifelong goals. The diverse student body, outstanding professors and the exceptional campus and facilities all contribute to the great appeal of the University to many students, myself included. I believe that Queen's would be a great fit for my aspirations.
My desire to pursue a career in the computing industry stems from my great interest of the increasingly prevalent technology sector. My interest has lead me to do much independant learning and I would like to continue that learning at a world class institution such as Queen's. In the next four years of my life I would like to receive the best education possible. The Queen's computing program would help me achieve that. My goal is to not only achieve high academic grades but also gain valuable experience that will benefit me in the future. The Queen's Undergraduate Internship Program, a program unique to Queen's, is a opportunity I am looking forward to. This program will allow me to gain the practical experience and skills that I will apply in my future career.
I consider post-secondary education to be one of the most important steps of my life and I hope that I can have the privilege of furthering my education at Queen's.
