This is one of my essays for my UCF application, please tell what you think.
"Why did you choose University of Central Florida?" This is a question that is asked to me almost as often as "What do you want to be in the future?" Among my explanations and responses, I often reply by saying "why not UCF?" I first fell in love with UCF during my 2009 summer vacation in Orlando. Because I was approaching my senior year in high school, I decided to visit the Orlando campus while I was there. As I walked through the beautiful campus of UCF, I was immediately attracted to the liveliness of the university. In addition to the liveliness of the campus, the location of UCF in the heart of one of America's most popular cities added tremendous desire for me to attend this university. Having interest in the medical field, the newly founded and modern medical program at UCF has greatly influenced my desire to attend this college. After realizing that UCF was the college that I wanted to be at in my future, I began to read statements from students and alumni of UCF. As I read through these statements, I noticed a relationship between the students and the professors that not many colleges possess. And last but not least, my desire to attend UCF was heightened as I became aware of all of the extracurricular activities offered my the college. Having participated in sports and other organization for most of my life, extracurricular activities has definitely become one of my key things to look for in a college and UCF definitely has what I am looking for. In conclusion, liveliness, location, academics, and activities are among the many reason why I have chosen to apply at the University of Central Florida.
"Why did you choose University of Central Florida?" This is a question that is asked to me almost as often as "What do you want to be in the future?" Among my explanations and responses, I often reply by saying "why not UCF?" I first fell in love with UCF during my 2009 summer vacation in Orlando. Because I was approaching my senior year in high school, I decided to visit the Orlando campus while I was there. As I walked through the beautiful campus of UCF, I was immediately attracted to the liveliness of the university. In addition to the liveliness of the campus, the location of UCF in the heart of one of America's most popular cities added tremendous desire for me to attend this university. Having interest in the medical field, the newly founded and modern medical program at UCF has greatly influenced my desire to attend this college. After realizing that UCF was the college that I wanted to be at in my future, I began to read statements from students and alumni of UCF. As I read through these statements, I noticed a relationship between the students and the professors that not many colleges possess. And last but not least, my desire to attend UCF was heightened as I became aware of all of the extracurricular activities offered my the college. Having participated in sports and other organization for most of my life, extracurricular activities has definitely become one of my key things to look for in a college and UCF definitely has what I am looking for. In conclusion, liveliness, location, academics, and activities are among the many reason why I have chosen to apply at the University of Central Florida.