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Personal circumstances give us new experiences and broaden our narrow sight, even it could help us to get more comprehensive understanding of the world, the society and our life itself. I believe there are two charming qualities that were likely to influence the person I am now.
Throughout my childhood to my teen years, I have dealt with the financial problems of my family. My parents came from Hodeidah and struggled financially because they moved without anything and we had to adjust to a new, different environment. Moving from place to place, bouncing from school to school, and from community to community. I didn't understand why my friends at school had all luxurious life and the latest technology while I could hardly keep up with the essential things that could keep me alive. My parent's sacrificial heart made them separated for us to live, and the obligation of the family had forced my father to stay away from us. And my mother had to play the parental role alone. She helped, protected, supported, and stood by us whenever she felt that we started to mess up. We experienced various hardships alone, but we could overcome them. In return, my parents' sacrifice made me strong-willed and determined to get a good education and become successful person who deserved their sacrifice. And I realize that parents have a kind of instinct to sacrifice a part of their happiness for the best life of their children.
Besides to the sacrificing quality from my parents, independence was the second attribute which affected my life time. Since I graduated from secondary school, I started to work as a nurse and helped with the expenses of the family. I used to work for more than twelve hours a day and at that small age, it was really difficult time for me because I was never far away from home for such a long time. However, from that very moment, my family started to count on me that helped to shape my personality as a responsible, and a respectful member in the family. Furthermore, As I started my practical life early, I used to pay for all my college expenses as well as family needs. I became the person whom my parents rely on. Whenever, my family confronts a financial hardship, they ask for my help as well as when there is an important decision they should make, I am used to be a person whose opinion is important.
General speaking, sacrifice and independence attributes have transformed my character as it is now and have made me a women of clear vision to future. In my opinion, life is only achieved through meaningful personal change and it is easy to see how what may appear to you as the biggest problem of your life, may in fact be your greatest spiritual benefit and positively reflect your entire life.
I would appreciate your comments and you improvement on my essay... Thanks a million guys!!
Personal circumstances give us new experiences and broaden our narrow sight, even it could help us to get more comprehensive understanding of the world, the society and our life itself. I believe there are two charming qualities that were likely to influence the person I am now.
Throughout my childhood to my teen years, I have dealt with the financial problems of my family. My parents came from Hodeidah and struggled financially because they moved without anything and we had to adjust to a new, different environment. Moving from place to place, bouncing from school to school, and from community to community. I didn't understand why my friends at school had all luxurious life and the latest technology while I could hardly keep up with the essential things that could keep me alive. My parent's sacrificial heart made them separated for us to live, and the obligation of the family had forced my father to stay away from us. And my mother had to play the parental role alone. She helped, protected, supported, and stood by us whenever she felt that we started to mess up. We experienced various hardships alone, but we could overcome them. In return, my parents' sacrifice made me strong-willed and determined to get a good education and become successful person who deserved their sacrifice. And I realize that parents have a kind of instinct to sacrifice a part of their happiness for the best life of their children.
Besides to the sacrificing quality from my parents, independence was the second attribute which affected my life time. Since I graduated from secondary school, I started to work as a nurse and helped with the expenses of the family. I used to work for more than twelve hours a day and at that small age, it was really difficult time for me because I was never far away from home for such a long time. However, from that very moment, my family started to count on me that helped to shape my personality as a responsible, and a respectful member in the family. Furthermore, As I started my practical life early, I used to pay for all my college expenses as well as family needs. I became the person whom my parents rely on. Whenever, my family confronts a financial hardship, they ask for my help as well as when there is an important decision they should make, I am used to be a person whose opinion is important.
General speaking, sacrifice and independence attributes have transformed my character as it is now and have made me a women of clear vision to future. In my opinion, life is only achieved through meaningful personal change and it is easy to see how what may appear to you as the biggest problem of your life, may in fact be your greatest spiritual benefit and positively reflect your entire life.