ESSAY #2 Describe a recent academic challenge you have faced and how you have overcome it.
(Essay should be 600 words or Less)
So I would really love some feedback from you guys on how to improve my essay, thank you so much.!
Throughout my entire education I have faced several obstacles. The most significant academic challenge has been not having someone to guide and help me understand my academic classes. As a child born from a family with barely any high school graduates, education became tremendously difficult because although my Mom desired to help me, she did not know how. But this challenge did not keep me from accomplishing my goals. It only made them difficult, not impossible. Ever since I was in Elementary, math has always been a difficult subject for me; in elementary school, it took me weeks to understand basic division and multiplication. Even though throughout these last couple of years my math skills have improved, it's still a challenge for me to ace any math class. Last year when I took Algebra 2, I knew right away it wasn't going to be easy. The Long Division, all the graphs and the complex equations left me dazed, I had never felt so overwhelmed. Whenever I studied for the tests and quizzes I couldn't help but to feel lost in a sea of difficult notes; I knew I needed help, so from then on I made it my number one priority to attend all the after school tutoring I could; even if it meant I had to sacrifice some activities. Surprisingly, the sessions with my teacher and fellow classmates made a huge difference- my grade went up a whole letter grade, and even it wasn't an A, I was extremely proud of myself, I knew I did the best I could.
(Essay should be 600 words or Less)
So I would really love some feedback from you guys on how to improve my essay, thank you so much.!
Throughout my entire education I have faced several obstacles. The most significant academic challenge has been not having someone to guide and help me understand my academic classes. As a child born from a family with barely any high school graduates, education became tremendously difficult because although my Mom desired to help me, she did not know how. But this challenge did not keep me from accomplishing my goals. It only made them difficult, not impossible. Ever since I was in Elementary, math has always been a difficult subject for me; in elementary school, it took me weeks to understand basic division and multiplication. Even though throughout these last couple of years my math skills have improved, it's still a challenge for me to ace any math class. Last year when I took Algebra 2, I knew right away it wasn't going to be easy. The Long Division, all the graphs and the complex equations left me dazed, I had never felt so overwhelmed. Whenever I studied for the tests and quizzes I couldn't help but to feel lost in a sea of difficult notes; I knew I needed help, so from then on I made it my number one priority to attend all the after school tutoring I could; even if it meant I had to sacrifice some activities. Surprisingly, the sessions with my teacher and fellow classmates made a huge difference- my grade went up a whole letter grade, and even it wasn't an A, I was extremely proud of myself, I knew I did the best I could.