hey guy here is a draft of my essay that i'm going to be sending in when i apply, i was wondering if you guys would see if their was anything i could add or change.
when I think of someone who has had a significant influence on me, I immediately think of my teacher, Erin Rothwell. She isn't just a teacher to me, to me she is someone who I admire and look up to and also someone who I consider is a second mother to me.
I was born on January 7th 1994 3 months' early weighting one pound 8 ouches. The doctors said I lucky to be alive, and that I was going to have some trouble learning in school because a normal pregnancy is 37 to 42 weeks and I was 26 weeks.
Growing up I didn't understand what were some of the consequences of being premature until the 2nd grade. I remember the day like it was yesterday. I had started doing bad in school for a couple of weeks and the teacher were concerned so they decided to have a meeting with my mother and I to tell her that I wasn't able to do most of the assignments that the other kids were doing and I should stay back a year and go into a class where I can get help because I have some type of learning disability. After the meeting was over I asked my mom what that meant and all she said was that everything was going to be ok and not to worry about anything. Fast forward to 8th grade and I'm finally able to understand what this learning disability actually was. It turns out that I sometimes have a hard time processing things in a way that I can understand and or remember them also during that time I started thinking of my future and what I wanted to do.
when I think of someone who has had a significant influence on me, I immediately think of my teacher, Erin Rothwell. She isn't just a teacher to me, to me she is someone who I admire and look up to and also someone who I consider is a second mother to me.
I was born on January 7th 1994 3 months' early weighting one pound 8 ouches. The doctors said I lucky to be alive, and that I was going to have some trouble learning in school because a normal pregnancy is 37 to 42 weeks and I was 26 weeks.
Growing up I didn't understand what were some of the consequences of being premature until the 2nd grade. I remember the day like it was yesterday. I had started doing bad in school for a couple of weeks and the teacher were concerned so they decided to have a meeting with my mother and I to tell her that I wasn't able to do most of the assignments that the other kids were doing and I should stay back a year and go into a class where I can get help because I have some type of learning disability. After the meeting was over I asked my mom what that meant and all she said was that everything was going to be ok and not to worry about anything. Fast forward to 8th grade and I'm finally able to understand what this learning disability actually was. It turns out that I sometimes have a hard time processing things in a way that I can understand and or remember them also during that time I started thinking of my future and what I wanted to do.