'continue my passion for philosophy' - USC Supplement, Why Essay

I believe there is no better place for me to continue my passion for philosophy than USC College School of Philosophy. I want to go to law school after graduating from college, so I will major in Bachelor of Arts in Philosophy, Politics and Law in USC, which could provide me with the unique opportunity to apply the abstract philosophical concepts to real-life problems of civil and poltical case. A successful philosophical study requires free intellectual exchange, diversity of opinions and the understanding of the philosophical research's context. Through USC Study Abroad Program, I could go to places like Athen and enroll in Ancient Greek Studies, retracing the cradle of the western civilization. The small class size and department workshops in USC could ensure free and close intellectual exchange among students and faculty, which would open me to many possibilities of understanding philosophical problems. At USC, I could have the access to best philosophy library in the whole country: Hoose Libray of Philosophy. Most importantly, I would be able to take classes taught by not only great professors but even great philosophers in USC, such as Andrei Marmor and Gary Watson.

Overall, USC School of Philosophy would be a dream come true for me.

this is a great essay. it's short, prompt, and to the point. you state specific reasons as to why USC will be the best fit for you. regarding the sentence, "Through USC's study abroad program..." I believe you are talking about Athens , Greece, am I correct? Be a little bit more specific. Overall, good job

Well, I like ur answer and I can see ur future plan clearly.
Since u've already adressed ur passion for philosophy in common app, u don't have to describe it one more time. However, I think u should still add something to the begining cuz I feel the ur answer cannot grab my attention once I read it even ur answer to "how u plan to pursue them" is really detailed and well written.

Can u help my USC supplement? THX~ =D

...philosophical concepts to real-life problems of civil and poltical cases .

Through the USC Study Abroad Program, I could go to places like Athens and enroll in Ancient Greek Studies, retracing the cradle of the W estern civilization.

At USC, I could have the access to the best philosophy library in the whole country: Hoose Libray of Philosophy.

This would be even better, if you throw in a quote from a great philosopher, summing up an idea that goes with the essay!

:)