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Question 1. How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago. (one or two paragraphs).
Out of all the colleges I applied to, the University of Chicago would be my final choice because of the prestigious education it has and its diverse community that I want to experience and enjoy. UChicago has a program called the Core which is originated from the faculty members and brings the undergraduates closer for a global conversation, which can take my desire to learn to a whole new level and go beyond my limits. I remember when my high school counselor asked me if I was the kind of student who takes classes for high school credits or I take classes to challenge myself, I told her that I was both. Although I take classes because I needed to, there are some cases where I take classes from the sense of my curiosity because I may never know if I would like themor not, but most importantly I want to challenge myself. In addition, because I participated in a few high school activities, I look forward on changing that by joining the tremendous amounts of clubs and organizations, such as the Ultimate Frisbee (Men's), Alpha Phi Omega and etc., and communicating to other students that have the same interests as I do.
But the most important that is as equally as to UChicago's education is its diversity, one of the things I value the most. Although I have friends that originated from different backgrounds, I don't really know anything about their culture. But, UChicago brings out the culture from each background by holding events such as Culture Shows and PanAsia. Not only that, but also the fact UChicago has a study abroad program excites me because I can get the chance of exposing myself and embracing cultures that are unknown to me. Overall, University of Chicago would be a match for me because I want to experience and challenge myself the education this campus offers and have the valuable skills I need to exceed in life, but at the same time to enjoy the college experience.
Question 1. How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago. (one or two paragraphs).
Out of all the colleges I applied to, the University of Chicago would be my final choice because of the prestigious education it has and its diverse community that I want to experience and enjoy. UChicago has a program called the Core which is originated from the faculty members and brings the undergraduates closer for a global conversation, which can take my desire to learn to a whole new level and go beyond my limits. I remember when my high school counselor asked me if I was the kind of student who takes classes for high school credits or I take classes to challenge myself, I told her that I was both. Although I take classes because I needed to, there are some cases where I take classes from the sense of my curiosity because I may never know if I would like themor not, but most importantly I want to challenge myself. In addition, because I participated in a few high school activities, I look forward on changing that by joining the tremendous amounts of clubs and organizations, such as the Ultimate Frisbee (Men's), Alpha Phi Omega and etc., and communicating to other students that have the same interests as I do.
But the most important that is as equally as to UChicago's education is its diversity, one of the things I value the most. Although I have friends that originated from different backgrounds, I don't really know anything about their culture. But, UChicago brings out the culture from each background by holding events such as Culture Shows and PanAsia. Not only that, but also the fact UChicago has a study abroad program excites me because I can get the chance of exposing myself and embracing cultures that are unknown to me. Overall, University of Chicago would be a match for me because I want to experience and challenge myself the education this campus offers and have the valuable skills I need to exceed in life, but at the same time to enjoy the college experience.