Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (*) (100 words or fewer)
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Course 2-A of mechanical engineering department of MIT is an ideal program for me. I love machines and the fundamental principles on which they work. My desire is to understand these rationales, apply them and disseminate them to the future generations as a professional. I also wish to contribute the people of the world with an easier, an advanced and a prosperous life by creating many chef-d'oeuvre (or should I use masterpieces) in machinery. To fulfill my dream which is to achieve a profound knowledge in mechanical engineering, I need to be bestow from the best engineering school of the world i.e. MIT.
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Course 2-A of mechanical engineering department of MIT is an ideal program for me. I love machines and the fundamental principles on which they work. My desire is to understand these rationales, apply them and disseminate them to the future generations as a professional. I also wish to contribute the people of the world with an easier, an advanced and a prosperous life by creating many chef-d'oeuvre (or should I use masterpieces) in machinery. To fulfill my dream which is to achieve a profound knowledge in mechanical engineering, I need to be bestow from the best engineering school of the world i.e. MIT.
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