My creativity - How would people in your community describe you, what are you proud of yourself

myself in the eyes of others

If you ask any of my friends to describe me, the first thing that comes up to them will probably be my creativity (believe me, I have made lots of polls about me on my Instagram!). In fact, I have been treated like a "savior" by my team in class many times ( sometimes even by my club) thanks to my "crazy" opinions that I came up with during the time that they ran out of ideas for our projects. Additionally, I also earn a good reputation for my sense of humor since I'm always the person to hype everybody up with my jokes in my class to help them feel more comfortable when working with me, and this personality, in some ways, makes me find it quite easy to make new friends and to integrate into any society.

However, in my parents' eyes, I'm more likely to be a determined, as well as a hard-working person, and these characteristics are what I'm proud of myself the most. During my days at secondary school, my results were always the last in my class, and this made my parents feel extremely disappointed, but everything has changed since I decided to apply for the top high school in my province. Although I received many objections from my parents and teachers, I still put all of my time and effort into studying, with a strong belief in my ability. Finally, I successfully passed the school's entrance test with 35.25 points in total, and this unbelievable achievement has changed my parents' and teachers' attitudes towards me forever.

** I really have no idea if this is appropriate in my college essay!! Please help me !!! Thank you in advance.

There is no "I" reference in this essay. Disassociate yourself from the presentation. Use a 3rd person reference since you are to analyze yourself through the eyes of other people. You can respond to the prompt in any way you like. I would however, like to caution you against using an over-familiar and friendly tour as you do here. Always respect the reviewer who is an academic professional. That means, no parenthesis with exclamation point references. Avoid trying to over present your personality as well. Read the passages you wrote. The character presentation is uneven. There isn't enough development involved in the presentation. Use highlights, your strongest suits. Don't use partially explained characteristics because it affects the way you are percieved by the reviewer.