The culture diversification topic of University of Washington short answer essay.

The University of Washington seeks to create a community of students richly diverse in cultural backgrounds, experiences, and viewpoints. How would you contribute to this community?

Culture is quite a word in my mind. Culture contains many essential elements in many aspects including habits, experience, way of dealing things and so on. I believe what The University of Washington want is just the thing that I want to show.

I am not born in a rich family with a lot of toys to play in childhood. I believe that is the principle situation of many children who have the same age as me. Living in a small village, I always been thinking that I am a flying bird who can move to everywhere no matter how far it is or how high it is. I was totally changed by this environment which you can also call it culture. I built many 'inventions' in the little village, which almost has no device that contains advanced technology. I strongly remember that almost all people came to one's house just because of his new TV. That is funny to remind these things now. We people know how to make good use of money and I know it is really a good point.

The small village, which has great magical power, gave me inspirations in doing things. I used to play bricks on a little mound that can be seen easily in rural areas. I learned a lot from these kind of fun. I built my own tunnels in side the mound and called my little fellows to play and observe together. I also called the brick 'car' and built many 'roads' for my 'car'. From now on, I found that my creative ability improved a lot just because of that game. We learned and had fun only from this pure, simple, childish game. I believe that is the best part in my childhood.

Sometimes culture will change because of environment. I am already a child who always wants to create something or try new things since my childhood time. I came to a big city with my grandpa from the little village when I was 10 years old. I felt desperately bland, afraid and strange. I could not show myself to others who are in the same class with me because we may not have the same 'culture'. Parents showed great love to me, so did the teacher do. I felt warm and comfortable. I believe love can build a bridge. The bridge brought me to a new place and made me adapt this brand new place well. Soon I could handle all things as well as other did.

I believe the most valuable thing I can bring to the University of Washington for diversification is creation. There are no same two creations in the world. But don't forget love is universal. Use love to build the 'bridge' and use creation to make it perfect.

Thanks a lot for helping me dealing with my essay, I really appreciated.Morgan 4/12/2010

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Overall, the essay has a good theme. You just need to really look over that grammar very carefully, because there are a lot of mistakes, a few of which I corrected for you

Thank you very much for the advices. I will think carefully about those problems.